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SagaciousFancy — The Filthy vs. The Meak
Published: 2004-11-18 22:29:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 233; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 44
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In the darkest, dankest recesses of the world- it is there that the Filthy shall battle the MeakStock:
standing boy
pleading boy
alley
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Thank you! Not my best technically, but I guess I get the point across, heh.
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I don't think it looks like the standing guy is floating, but the visible hand on the kneeling one looks a little funky. Granted, putting people where they weren't before is hard to get perfectly right, but... It just looks very odd.
Still neat, though. I love the mood of the piece.
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That's just the way the hand was. There wasn't much I could change.
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Very very good. You used a very appropriate background for the piece, it helps deliver the emotion, and I think you did an excellent job in making it look like the two figures are really there. My only constructive critique would be about the figure standing . . . His feet do not seem to be touching the floor. I do realize, however, that to make the piece punch as it does that is where you had to place him and can forgive you for it (like you need forgiving in the first place? 
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it's alright. I accept criticism. There are worse things that you didn't point out, but I'll leave it to you to find them, heh. It is not perfect. I made it too quickly, and maybe should go back and fix some of it...
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That is up to you. I rather liked it though. Worse things? The other thing, besides the feet, that I might complain about being a little off would be the blood, but it's not like I could do any better, therefore couldn't give you an pointers on how to improve that, so I'll take it with a grain of salt, as they say.
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beautiful scene,
very ... disturbing setting and body compositions!
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thanks. It's still a little messy...
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