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Published: 2014-12-16 00:44:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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AmandaElise [2014-12-16 00:57:40 +0000 UTC]

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This is a great piece to have in your portfolio. It demonstrates a unique ability to use expressive lines, yet it's not quite abstract. The lines add a lot of emotion to the piece. They help it flow and give it dimension but I think they also help give it meaning. These two pieces are both very good examples of this skill. Particularly because the one on the left is a lot heavier with lines than the one on the right. I think this demonstrates your ability to use this skill both heavy handedly and light handedly. That's valuable, because they ultimately have a very different feel to the overall piece.

To keep it simple, this is good work! Keep it up!

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SageFillyLuna In reply to AmandaElise [2014-12-16 02:25:39 +0000 UTC]

oh my goodness thank you so much!

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AmandaElise In reply to SageFillyLuna [2014-12-16 03:13:14 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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