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Published: 2017-08-18 16:03:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 978; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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part 13

Ninjaws is not a weak rival

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ultimaterainbowstar0 [2019-02-15 18:42:34 +0000 UTC]

woah! that golden hook looks dangerous be carefull for that!

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ToaDJacara [2017-08-19 19:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Hope they could find Ninjaws' weakness soon!

Still cool fight!

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CrazyEchidnaLady [2017-08-18 23:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Rayman, you're really lucky to have no neck!


O.O Wait how do you eat?! XD



(awesome part btw )

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YourClairyGodmother [2017-08-18 16:18:11 +0000 UTC]

I like the blur effects. The dialogue in this strip is a little basic, but I'm still on the edge of my seat!

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SailorRaybloomDZ In reply to YourClairyGodmother [2017-08-18 16:33:11 +0000 UTC]

I focused more on action on this page. I imagine all this as a cartoon, where it would be kind of annoying if characters talked every second, especially during action

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YourClairyGodmother In reply to SailorRaybloomDZ [2017-08-18 16:51:03 +0000 UTC]

I like to view my comics and stories as cartoons and anime. Visualization is super easy for me. I see all kinds of things in my head, and they just flow onto the page. I want to be a cartoonist when I'm older, and I like your style!

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SailorRaybloomDZ In reply to YourClairyGodmother [2017-08-18 18:05:07 +0000 UTC]

well, you sure can learn a lot of things here, maybe even from my comics.
also remember this - some stories can be told without dialogue as well. it persuades the watchers to think more.

thank you

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YourClairyGodmother In reply to SailorRaybloomDZ [2017-08-18 18:06:14 +0000 UTC]

I do learn a lot from your comics.

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SailorRaybloomDZ In reply to YourClairyGodmother [2017-08-18 18:06:40 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear it

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YourClairyGodmother In reply to SailorRaybloomDZ [2017-08-19 14:13:55 +0000 UTC]

As my teacher Mr. Breadner says to me "You're a better writer than you think."

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Marjo-MidoriMedicham [2017-08-18 16:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Hello,

What about you joining my DA group ? Just join as a member if you want...^^

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SailorRaybloomDZ In reply to Marjo-MidoriMedicham [2017-08-18 16:32:23 +0000 UTC]

no thank you

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Marjo-MidoriMedicham In reply to SailorRaybloomDZ [2017-08-18 16:35:17 +0000 UTC]

All right. As you want, it does not matter...^^

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