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Sakura2349 — I was taught right from wrong
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Description I was taught right from wrong
By a murderer
I was taught truth from lies
By a magician
I was taught who my friends were
By my enemy
I was taught to be honest
By a professional liar


I was taught to always speak my mind
By being told to keep quiet
I was taught to be kind
By someone that beat me down
I was taught to smile
By someone who could never wipe a scowl of their face
I was taught to love
By being abused


I was taught to live
By someone who was already dead
I was taught to perform
By someone with stage fright
I was taught to be excellent
By someone that failed in everything
I was taught to rely on only my self
By being surrounded with people


I was taught to be perfect
By those that wanted to see me fail
I was taught to be loyal
By everyone that ever walked out of my life
I was taught to make people happy
By everyone who ever made me miserable
I was taught to control my temper
By those with explosive tempers


I was taught to take care of myself
By those who tried to kill me
I was taught what matters to me
By those that took it all away
I was taught how to be a girly girl
By a bunch of boys
I was taught how bad modern medicine can be
By a drug addict


I was taught who deserved my heart
By having my rib cage shattered
I was taught to stand center stage
By having my shoulders disjointed
I was taught not everyone is as nice as they seem
By having my wrist taken out
I was taught how far people are willing to go
By seeing him dying  


This may not makes sense to everyone
But to those it does
They know, just like me
Betrayal is the best teacher


And, what doesn't kill you defines you
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Comments: 457

Sakura2349 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Thabk you so very much

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xMetalBahamutx In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:44:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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pisceswitch In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:12:39 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.

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Sakura2349 In reply to pisceswitch [2013-02-08 01:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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pisceswitch In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-24 02:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Welcome.

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RnRSentinelDA In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Never have I been able to say what you have written. You are taught to be better by seeing the worst. You stand up when you have fallen down. You begin to live after feeling like you're dead. It's about never giving up.

Thank you so much for writing this. It means a lot. I hope the best for you and your future.

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Sakura2349 In reply to RnRSentinelDA [2013-02-08 01:12:57 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad you like it...and thanks for the comment

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:08:10 +0000 UTC]

This speaks to me on so many levels. I would say a good 99% of this I have experienced. Very powerful and very well written.

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Sakura2349 In reply to ThornsofPurpleRoses [2013-02-08 01:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Than you...I'm sorry you relate to the pain but glad you liked

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:18:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem It's a pain I've learned to deal with, and most of it is mostly scars now rather than open wounds

I hope the pain behind this poem is long gone for you now.

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Sakura2349 In reply to ThornsofPurpleRoses [2013-02-08 01:24:34 +0000 UTC]

It is and it isnt...I still deal with some of the people on a every now and then basis...but when i was younger they had all the control and now they have very little

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:29:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad to hear it is nearly gone. I only just rid myself of my version of the destructive people listed here, and I already feel amazingly independent and in control.

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Sakura2349 In reply to ThornsofPurpleRoses [2013-02-08 01:44:10 +0000 UTC]

It is a nice feeling when you can finally breath without worrying about everyone else

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:50:50 +0000 UTC]

Yes it is! It is very liberating to make that final decision that you're living for yourself now, and no one else. I used to try to please everyone around me and it just made me completely miserable. It's amazing to finally be happy

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Sakura2349 In reply to ThornsofPurpleRoses [2013-02-08 01:53:22 +0000 UTC]

There's still some people I want to make happy but it is cause they are my real friends not cause I have to...I think that's the nicest change

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes, there are people I want to make happy, like my husband and daughter, but I mean no longer wasting my time trying to make people happy who really just want to see me suffer. I'll put an effort in for those who actually try to make me happy in return

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Sakura2349 In reply to ThornsofPurpleRoses [2013-02-08 01:58:37 +0000 UTC]

That is it exactly...but it is just so nice because it is something i want to do...rather than something i have to do or something that is expected of me

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ThornsofPurpleRoses In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Exactly how I feel

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kukucrazy4rioku In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:07:28 +0000 UTC]

"I was taught to be excellent
By someone that failed in everything "
Naruto~~~ D':

This was so beautiful, thank you for sharing it!

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Sakura2349 In reply to kukucrazy4rioku [2013-02-08 01:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha yes naruto...I'm glad you liked

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kuda357 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:07:24 +0000 UTC]

This is... purely amazing. Depressing but in a absolute beautiful way. Well spoken.

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Sakura2349 In reply to kuda357 [2013-02-08 01:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so so much

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kuda357 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 23:55:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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the-wandering-kid In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:03:59 +0000 UTC]

Violence is not the answer.

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Sakura2349 In reply to the-wandering-kid [2013-02-08 01:14:47 +0000 UTC]

No it's not...but when confronted with it I had to learn something from it

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sekkechi In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:54:06 +0000 UTC]

i....have nothing to say but this
this is going straight to my favs. it's so true
it's like what i once read "Darkness can indeed bring more darkness, but it can also birth light. And from light comes a rebirth with wisdom from the dark"

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Sakura2349 In reply to sekkechi [2013-02-08 00:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Haha that is like the perfect quote for this...thank you so much for the fave

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sekkechi In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:11:54 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome ^^
and i thought so too, it's actually from a tale about how the greek gods of darkness nyx and erebus birthed the twin gods of light aether and hemera. so darkness literally birthed and taught light in that instance

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gihrand In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:52:33 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful, and well written. Thank you for sharing something really beautiful <3

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Sakura2349 In reply to gihrand [2013-02-08 00:58:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for commenting... I'm really glad you liked

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EeveeTree In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:52:05 +0000 UTC]

I've learned a lot about what it means to be a good friend from a bad ex-friend. I think that's how it goes a lot of the time.

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Sakura2349 In reply to EeveeTree [2013-02-08 00:58:28 +0000 UTC]

You learn from those that hurt you

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EeveeTree In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 23:35:57 +0000 UTC]

Indeed you do.

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Winged-Wolf-Tears In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:49:32 +0000 UTC]

You are amazing, you worded it perfectly. Thank you for putting into words how others can't.
I love every part of this because it is completely true.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Winged-Wolf-Tears [2013-02-08 01:00:44 +0000 UTC]

I am really glad you liked it...thank you for commenting and the support

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TiffanyTheDarkCat In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:46:06 +0000 UTC]

This is so true, it's every daily when you think about it.

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Sakura2349 In reply to TiffanyTheDarkCat [2013-02-08 01:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Haha I guess so...I just thought mine in large scale

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TiffanyTheDarkCat In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-10 20:56:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeeeup

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Sarah-BK In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:44:56 +0000 UTC]

I agree with almost all of that - but ultimately I agree completely with the truth behind this. Unfortunately not everyone learns how to bring good out of the bad... because they can't see what they're doing as wrong. No one likes admitting they're wrong, and hence not everyone learns the way you have. Then again, there always will be bad - for those that can learn good from it.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Sarah-BK [2013-02-08 01:07:39 +0000 UTC]

That's very true...glad you got all of that out of the poem...and thank you for the comment

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Sarah-BK In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 11:30:18 +0000 UTC]

No problem at all

Thank you for sharing

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KMCupid In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:43:50 +0000 UTC]

This is the most.....truthful thing I have ever read. Its like a breif descrpition of life. Well unless your the teacher. But dont we all become one some day?

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Sakura2349 In reply to KMCupid [2013-02-08 00:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha nope these were all lessons people taught me... But thank you so much

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Dragonyxie In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:42:31 +0000 UTC]

So true. Beautiful <3

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Sakura2349 In reply to Dragonyxie [2013-02-08 00:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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TheArtistyk In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:41:27 +0000 UTC]

I can relate to this~ Very strong, powerful, and emotional, keep up the beautiful work~

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Sakura2349 In reply to TheArtistyk [2013-02-08 00:48:24 +0000 UTC]

I will try haha...I am glad you can relate... And thank you so much...

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TheArtistyk In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 00:53:59 +0000 UTC]

No problem, you're more than welcome~

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Una-Attrice-Fastoso In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 00:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Amen

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Sakura2349 In reply to Una-Attrice-Fastoso [2013-02-08 00:39:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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