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Sakura2349 — I was taught right from wrong
Published: 2013-02-07 18:59:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 8025; Favourites: 779; Downloads: 53
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Description I was taught right from wrong
By a murderer
I was taught truth from lies
By a magician
I was taught who my friends were
By my enemy
I was taught to be honest
By a professional liar


I was taught to always speak my mind
By being told to keep quiet
I was taught to be kind
By someone that beat me down
I was taught to smile
By someone who could never wipe a scowl of their face
I was taught to love
By being abused


I was taught to live
By someone who was already dead
I was taught to perform
By someone with stage fright
I was taught to be excellent
By someone that failed in everything
I was taught to rely on only my self
By being surrounded with people


I was taught to be perfect
By those that wanted to see me fail
I was taught to be loyal
By everyone that ever walked out of my life
I was taught to make people happy
By everyone who ever made me miserable
I was taught to control my temper
By those with explosive tempers


I was taught to take care of myself
By those who tried to kill me
I was taught what matters to me
By those that took it all away
I was taught how to be a girly girl
By a bunch of boys
I was taught how bad modern medicine can be
By a drug addict


I was taught who deserved my heart
By having my rib cage shattered
I was taught to stand center stage
By having my shoulders disjointed
I was taught not everyone is as nice as they seem
By having my wrist taken out
I was taught how far people are willing to go
By seeing him dying  


This may not makes sense to everyone
But to those it does
They know, just like me
Betrayal is the best teacher


And, what doesn't kill you defines you
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Comments: 457

ToxicSquirrel13 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:02:16 +0000 UTC]

wow...... beautiful! and makes so mush sense....

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Sakura2349 In reply to ToxicSquirrel13 [2013-02-08 02:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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caminante0 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow. How intense, and totally true.
Usually I don't read literature in DA because my english is very poor, but this... was worth it.

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Sakura2349 In reply to caminante0 [2013-02-08 01:58:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...and thank you even more for taking the time to comment

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caminante0 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:48:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Lovely-Chains-2341 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:55:36 +0000 UTC]

I fully understand. :/ This is something I wish I had written a long time ago, so i'm jealous you could put it in words. It's beautiful

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Sakura2349 In reply to Lovely-Chains-2341 [2013-02-08 02:00:01 +0000 UTC]

I am glad you like it...this had been biting at my mind for weeks...I wanted to vent and remember to be thankful for everything i gained after everything i went through...

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Lovely-Chains-2341 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. Wish I could still write poetry like this. Well, thank you for sharing. It really is a beautiful piece.

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rokiXroki In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:52:34 +0000 UTC]

This is just... HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUG!

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Sakura2349 In reply to rokiXroki [2013-02-08 01:55:24 +0000 UTC]

haha thank you for the hug

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rokiXroki In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Always ^_^ It's so true though.. But it does help us to learn and build upon what has happened to us in the past. I just wish others would keep the past in the past.

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Sakura2349 In reply to rokiXroki [2013-02-08 01:57:47 +0000 UTC]

thats true...I don't mind helping people deal with their past...as long as they can help me with mine

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rokiXroki In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:02:47 +0000 UTC]

I help people more than I let people help me. Mine's something I don't want to relive inside my head.. I'd rather help then get helped most of the time..

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Sakura2349 In reply to rokiXroki [2013-02-08 02:08:14 +0000 UTC]

I gave up trying to bury mine after my best friend called me out

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rokiXroki In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 03:46:55 +0000 UTC]

I haven't told mine about my past. It's something that never needs brought up again.

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Sakura2349 In reply to rokiXroki [2013-02-08 03:59:08 +0000 UTC]

That's understandable

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rokiXroki In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 21:27:22 +0000 UTC]

:3

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Azula35 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:52:15 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and honest. I can relate to you; having been betrayed makes me appreciate the good I have within and the good people I chose as my close ones more.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Azula35 [2013-02-08 01:56:08 +0000 UTC]

Thats exactly it...after seeing how horrible people could treat me there is very little I wouldnt do for those I know love me

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Azula35 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 03:29:01 +0000 UTC]

Same here; my real friends have shown me not all of humanity is worthless, fake and hateable... I don't know where I'd be without them

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Sakura2349 In reply to Azula35 [2013-02-08 04:04:38 +0000 UTC]

I relate to this completely

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XxChocolatexHeartsxX In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:51:03 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and it really speaks to me as well. A lot of good life lessons I learned was from what others and/or myself did wrong. It's obvious from reading it that you have as well. Great work!

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Sakura2349 In reply to XxChocolatexHeartsxX [2013-02-08 01:56:38 +0000 UTC]

Ive learned exactly what I don't want to be by being surrounded by people that weren't all that nice

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topec In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:41:19 +0000 UTC]

This is so sad and yet some of it I understand personally. Most I understand simply conceptually and hope to avoid myself. This is a powerful piece.

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Sakura2349 In reply to topec [2013-02-08 01:46:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...I am glad you liked this

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41Frostbite In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:35:26 +0000 UTC]

On a poetry point this is really good with the opposite lines.
This is very sad, and I can undestand some of it.
Stay Strong!!

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Sakura2349 In reply to 41Frostbite [2013-02-08 01:46:35 +0000 UTC]

I plan to...thank you so much for the support

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41Frostbite In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:06:34 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome

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Bluesparks4 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:29:39 +0000 UTC]

that is such a touching but sad story

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Sakura2349 In reply to Bluesparks4 [2013-02-08 01:47:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...yeah but at least I can say things are getting better

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Bookboy42 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:28:54 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely, and very honest.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Bookboy42 [2013-02-08 01:47:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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aloistrancy101 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:28:15 +0000 UTC]

you speak da truf!! thnx so much! :3 (this made me realize A LOT)

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Sakura2349 In reply to aloistrancy101 [2013-02-08 01:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...hope and glad you liked

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aloistrancy101 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-09 01:20:59 +0000 UTC]

i do!!! :3

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ViCaroline In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:27:36 +0000 UTC]

I recognize myself in every word of this text. Good job!

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Sakura2349 In reply to ViCaroline [2013-02-08 01:48:26 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you could relate to my work... A little sad at the same time...thanks for comment

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Levitating-Narwhal In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:25:07 +0000 UTC]

This is fucking awesome. There iss one error. "By everyone who made my miserable." Sorry. OCD.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Levitating-Narwhal [2013-02-08 01:27:13 +0000 UTC]

thaank you so much...and don't apologize...I make mistakes...and I am horrible at catching them so thank you

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Levitating-Narwhal In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:42:19 +0000 UTC]

No problem. And besides, we all make mistakes.

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Levitating-Narwhal In reply to Levitating-Narwhal [2013-02-08 01:25:38 +0000 UTC]

How ironic. I point out an error with a comment that has an error.

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Tektarra In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:17:35 +0000 UTC]

It's true; What doesn't kill you defines you

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Sakura2349 In reply to Tektarra [2013-02-08 01:19:20 +0000 UTC]

Thabk you...hope you enjoyed

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Tektarra In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 01:21:22 +0000 UTC]

It's awesome...

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Sakura2349 In reply to Tektarra [2013-02-08 01:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soooo much

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Tektarra In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-09 00:40:33 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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StellaStarfish In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:15:29 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful and powerful. By far my favorite poem on DA

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Sakura2349 In reply to StellaStarfish [2013-02-08 01:19:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh thank you so much

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StellaStarfish In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 05:12:42 +0000 UTC]

It was well deserved

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xMetalBahamutx In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 01:14:42 +0000 UTC]

So touching, and yet so thought-provoking.

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