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Sakura2349 — I was taught right from wrong
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Description I was taught right from wrong
By a murderer
I was taught truth from lies
By a magician
I was taught who my friends were
By my enemy
I was taught to be honest
By a professional liar


I was taught to always speak my mind
By being told to keep quiet
I was taught to be kind
By someone that beat me down
I was taught to smile
By someone who could never wipe a scowl of their face
I was taught to love
By being abused


I was taught to live
By someone who was already dead
I was taught to perform
By someone with stage fright
I was taught to be excellent
By someone that failed in everything
I was taught to rely on only my self
By being surrounded with people


I was taught to be perfect
By those that wanted to see me fail
I was taught to be loyal
By everyone that ever walked out of my life
I was taught to make people happy
By everyone who ever made me miserable
I was taught to control my temper
By those with explosive tempers


I was taught to take care of myself
By those who tried to kill me
I was taught what matters to me
By those that took it all away
I was taught how to be a girly girl
By a bunch of boys
I was taught how bad modern medicine can be
By a drug addict


I was taught who deserved my heart
By having my rib cage shattered
I was taught to stand center stage
By having my shoulders disjointed
I was taught not everyone is as nice as they seem
By having my wrist taken out
I was taught how far people are willing to go
By seeing him dying  


This may not makes sense to everyone
But to those it does
They know, just like me
Betrayal is the best teacher


And, what doesn't kill you defines you
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Comments: 457

Sakura2349 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...And thank you for reading despite the computer troubles...I am glad you liked it that much...and thank you for taking the time to comment

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Strudel--Cutie4427 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 04:38:08 +0000 UTC]

I saw your reply in my messages and decided that was a sign that I should read it again and the more I read it the more I want to animate it... If that makes any sence...

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Sakura2349 In reply to Strudel--Cutie4427 [2013-02-08 04:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Haha well if ya can your more than welcome to...I'm really glad you like it...

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snowball1948 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:26:53 +0000 UTC]

This is very beautiful you are extrmemly talented I RARELY favorite poetry but i just cant help myself!!

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 02:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much...that makes it all the more an honor

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Aww!! You are VERY wellcome!! Are you a writer!? Like as a living or like a poet or something??

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 02:31:17 +0000 UTC]

nope...actually I am in college for business...haha I struggle with calc but I want to go into accounting

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:43:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well your poetry is so good i just HAD to watch you, haha, i think you are the first poet I have ever watch before... i usually go for anime artists. anyway... I hope we can get allong!!

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 02:44:39 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh i love anime!! Which ones do you like

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:51:05 +0000 UTC]

Well... just I few of my favorites are ouran high school host club, fruits basket, soul eater, blue exorcist, corpse princess, say i love you, pandora hearts, and kaichou wa maid-sama (just off the top of my head... lolz)!! haha, ever seen any of them!?

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 02:53:01 +0000 UTC]

I love ouran haha love Tamaki!! He made me laugh so hard...I just recently watched all of fruits basket (netflix was the death of my social life) I've seen bits and pieces of soul eater my friend watches it but watches it when im not there and then verbally catches me up which is no where near the same as watching

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 03:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I LOVE ouaran too haha!! and kaichou wa maid sama kind of reminds me of it for some reason even thow the plots are not alike, they are just both really cute but kind of perverted comedies with love in it haha. and soul eater is good in the begining but it get WAY better closer to the end, it like blew my mind like... unexpectedness!! lolz

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 03:14:12 +0000 UTC]

haha I will just have to hang out with my friend when she gets closer to the end...I have never heard of kaichou wa maid sama...I watched shugo chara...lil pri...naruto...and when i was younger i loved yu-gi-oh not gonna lie still get excited when its on

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 03:46:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I love all those too... except lil pri, what that? O.o

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 03:59:53 +0000 UTC]

It's like these little girls that can turn into pop star princess...I may have spelled that wrong but that's close

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 04:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Haha, sounds kinda cute, is it good??

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Sakura2349 In reply to snowball1948 [2013-02-08 04:24:37 +0000 UTC]

It's cute I liked it

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snowball1948 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-09 03:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Cool, I'll watch it!!

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weaboobl In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:25:18 +0000 UTC]

this seems like something out of assassins creed (AKA. its epic)

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Sakura2349 In reply to weaboobl [2013-02-08 02:27:30 +0000 UTC]

haha ive only seen people play it I never played it myself so I only have a little idea of what you are talking about...but thank you

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weaboobl In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:31:56 +0000 UTC]

ASSASSINS CREED IS EPIC *nerd spaz*

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two awesome tributes to AC!

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DropFromTheOcean In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! I especially like the last line

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Sakura2349 In reply to DropFromTheOcean [2013-02-08 02:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you...that actually was one of my favorite... that and the first two because those represented major people in my life

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Anko6 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:23:15 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful, and I can relate with a point or two you gave... Stay strong.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Anko6 [2013-02-08 02:25:39 +0000 UTC]

I plan to...and glad you could relate to something...thanks for reading and thank you so much for taking the time to comment

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Anko6 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:29:12 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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iSpazzyKitty In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:22:22 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this is a beautiful piece of literature. Very deep. I love it!

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Sakura2349 In reply to iSpazzyKitty [2013-02-08 02:25:51 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad you like it

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iSpazzyKitty In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:38:35 +0000 UTC]

^^

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red-stained-december In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:21:21 +0000 UTC]

You're lucky you came out with a balance. Not everyone gets that chance.

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Sakura2349 In reply to red-stained-december [2013-02-08 02:21:54 +0000 UTC]

trust me...I know that...and there were times I almost didn't thats why i have to be thankful I did

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red-stained-december In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 04:55:26 +0000 UTC]

I admire you that you were able to have those people. Sometimes we get hurt so bad that we shut it all out and turn away those wonderful people in fear of being hurt again. You never gave up. Good going trooper.

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Futureflyer In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:17:15 +0000 UTC]

wow that is a very good piece of writing

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Sakura2349 In reply to Futureflyer [2013-02-08 02:22:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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everox2 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Yup. Brilliance.

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Sakura2349 In reply to everox2 [2013-02-08 02:22:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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everox2 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:41:55 +0000 UTC]

You are ever so welcome.

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xiaolin-kirby-fan In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:12:22 +0000 UTC]

"And my Scars remind me
that the past is real,
I tear my heart open
just to feel" ~ Papa Roach, 'Scars'

This is a fantastic piece! I don't think I know anyone who can't relate to this in one form or another, even without experiencing the problems faced in this poem. It's just like the thousands of quotes say "pain makes you stronger", and that's probably why it is so necessary to life.

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Sakura2349 In reply to xiaolin-kirby-fan [2013-02-08 02:23:55 +0000 UTC]

It is...but even more than making you stronger you have to learn what you don't want to be...and then don't treat people the way you were...that won't solve anything...That was the point of this...I learning everything i didnt want to be then tried to apply the exact opposite of what i was taught

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Starcobra In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Interesting Poem with an important life lesson. Thank you for posting it.

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Sakura2349 In reply to Starcobra [2013-02-08 02:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment...and thanks for the support

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Starcobra In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 23:32:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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dragonpeach In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:08:17 +0000 UTC]

That's pure poetry...

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Sakura2349 In reply to dragonpeach [2013-02-08 02:08:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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dragonpeach In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 02:14:52 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

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plaid-monster In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:05:14 +0000 UTC]

The first few stanza-- I feel the exact same way. Those are where I learned life's lessons from.
Love this.

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Sakura2349 In reply to plaid-monster [2013-02-08 02:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Glad someone else gets that and glad you enjoyed...thanks for the comment

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rio487 In reply to ??? [2013-02-08 02:03:31 +0000 UTC]

i really enjoyed it i know the felling and i agree with you i am waiting for your next poem

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Sakura2349 In reply to rio487 [2013-02-08 02:09:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you haha my moments are few and far between...mostly when I get inspired

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rio487 In reply to Sakura2349 [2013-02-08 04:06:49 +0000 UTC]

whose isn't but when inspiration strikes one must be ready because you never know you might me the next Shakespeare so never waste the opportunity to write

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