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Published: 2017-02-25 20:06:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 665; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 1
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Featuring Salem and SorinaSummer, Year 761 of the New Age
The Oldegrove Gardens, Glenmore
Sorina brought Salem to the edge of the gardens where it was quiet and out of the way of the work of the other gardeners. Here, Salem could learn about her newfound magic and try to train herself to use it properly.
"Watch me," Sorina instructed, turning to a bare patch of grass and beginning to grow little sprouts from the soil. "A good flower needs a good stem. Don't focus so much on the bud; that will come along with a proper base. Give the roots life so they can in turn give it to the rest of the flower." Before Salem's eyes, the sprouts grew larger and reached higher, and small colorful buds began to develop at their ends. She was fascinated.
"You try. Make the buds brighter and the leaves greener," Sorina stepped back so Salem could have access to her newly grown flowers. The filly closed her eyes and focused hard. Her bottom lip pouted and her nose wrinkled. She dug deep just as her sister had told her to, willing the magic from down inside of her and into the plants at her hooves. She felt the energy flow forward, weak at first and then slowly stronger.
"That's it, good," She purred encouragingly, and Salem wagged her tail in excitement.
"Now try to open up the petals," Sorina said.
When the filly made no more progress, Sorina turned to look back at her, "Salem, are you-?" and saw that her little sister was suddenly very preoccupied with a purple butterfly.
Sorina smiled and laughed despite herself when Salem flicked her tongue out for a taste test on her new friend and wasn't so pleased with the outcome.
"That's called a butterfly."
Salem beamed when it fluttered its wings and tickled her nose with its legs.
"Flutterby!"
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Windklang , I hope you don't mind I briefly mentioned your girl in this! I thought it was a cute idea <3
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Comments: 9
Windklang [2017-02-25 20:37:05 +0000 UTC]
Naw, its so cute
Just maybe one little thing - could you change "sorina shouted triumphantly into something more calm? Shes just not the triumphant shout type of doe but rather the watch-and-wait kind of thing <3.
Thank you, hun
I love this artpiece as I mentioned before
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salemtide In reply to Windklang [2017-02-25 20:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely!! I changed it, how does it look now?
Thanks a million, I can't wait for all the sisterly pieces we'll be able to do!
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Windklang In reply to salemtide [2017-02-25 20:42:26 +0000 UTC]
good!
You are furtherly welcome to use her as NPC Just tag me like here
Or you could also ask to proofread in advance, and let me go over the doc, then I can just adjust everything I like to change
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salemtide In reply to Windklang [2017-02-25 20:44:06 +0000 UTC]
That would work perfectly In the future I'll link you to the stash file before I upload it <3 <3 <3
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