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i am really glad with how this turned out lol origanally it was just supposed to be a quick practice sketch ^^out of all my OC in my manga DT i honestly think sakura is my favorite lol next to tastuya >< i have so many more characters to finalize so youll be seeing more of my OCs in the next couple of uploads
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SliderFox [2009-07-12 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]
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Alright, this is my first actual critique but here I go... As far as the coloring goes I really really like it. When I first saw the picture the fact the coloring job looked like it was only partially done was a little off putting but as I looked at it closely I really started to enjoy the artistic look of it. I think that the anatomy of her face is very very well done as well! I think for the most part it is really well done overall, except for the body under the left breast, it seems a little off when I look at it. As if the rib cage was jutting in a way. As I'm not as good at anatomy as you are I'm not entirely sure it is off it just kinda feels like it is. Like I said I really like it! I think that it is very artistic and a wonderful character sketch!
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Havanese In reply to SliderFox [2009-07-12 09:39:22 +0000 UTC]
I do like this drawing, but I think giving it such a high rating is a bit unfair when there's art out there that's much better. Of course, art is subjective, but I think you may want to be more critical in your future critiques.
Keep on critiquing though! Really work on training your eyes/mind to become more critical.
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SliderFox In reply to Havanese [2009-07-14 06:12:41 +0000 UTC]
I do see where you're coming from I've just never been very good at five point rating systems lol I could never be a very good critic I never really go below three stars on anything. I'm an overly nice person most of the time which isn't good for critiquing. lol
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Havanese In reply to SliderFox [2009-07-14 06:26:59 +0000 UTC]
Being nice is a good thing! Overly-nice, well, I guess it depends on the situation. I understand where you're coming from, and while I think having a critical eye and being able to critique well is definitely a good thing, it's not as though it's an essential quality to have. I didn't mean any offense to you or the artist (if s/he has read this), hope you know that. I just wanted to point out how I felt.
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SliderFox In reply to Havanese [2009-07-23 06:48:47 +0000 UTC]
Well understood ^-^ Thank you!
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Cornelious-Raidon [2009-07-10 15:10:47 +0000 UTC]
kawaii ona is kawaii
Boku wa totemo weeaboo desuyo ._.
I gottta stop spouting off randomly in Japanese xD
Cute pic nevertheless
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Salty1 In reply to Cornelious-Raidon [2009-07-11 05:01:18 +0000 UTC]
lol thank you XD and the random japanese is awesome XD
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Cornelious-Raidon In reply to Salty1 [2009-07-12 00:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Sweeeeet No prob dude xD
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puremrz [2009-07-10 11:06:42 +0000 UTC]
Yay, red eyes pink hair combination ftw! Your Sakura and my Youko should have a battle.
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puremrz In reply to Salty1 [2009-07-11 08:47:58 +0000 UTC]
What's Sakura's skills? Youko knows magic
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Salty1 In reply to puremrz [2009-07-12 04:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Sakura has what many of my charaters have within the story line, it deals with thier DNA and Genetics,its called Devils Blood, so basically she has unatural abilities that pretty much makes her super human!!! lol so she is supa fast, supa strong, and all the other good stuff lol XD, but not all the characters share the same strengths some excell in others and some have different abilities, but ya lol thats pretty much it ^^
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puremrz In reply to Salty1 [2009-07-12 09:13:36 +0000 UTC]
Sounds like she would kick Youko's ass.
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RaveVampyre [2009-07-10 10:15:23 +0000 UTC]
She's so cute! I love her red eyes :3 I have always really liked the combination of pink hair and red eyes *-*
Also, good luck on becoming a mangaka! :3 It seems like a lot of us here on dA have that dream^^
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Salty1 In reply to RaveVampyre [2009-07-11 05:11:47 +0000 UTC]
ya ive noticed!!! there are so many talented artists here on DA im really surprised alot of them aren't published!!(especially cuz some of the ones that are have been really crappy lately lol)
and good luck too you as well :3
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RaveVampyre In reply to Salty1 [2009-07-11 08:56:08 +0000 UTC]
I have noticed that as well! It's crazy how one moment I think I all of the best artists on my watch and then I come across someone else with great art and I wonder why I didn't find them before!
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