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Sameoldjo — Fire and ice Preface
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Published: 2009-01-22 21:32:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 93; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I sighed. There was no way to escape. It felt as though the walls were closing in as the three of the stalked closer to me. I went through my blessings and counted Koori twice. My fire was out. The was no one to save me now. The hunter bared his teeth and his followers increased their tempo toward my demise. My time is up. I thought to myself as they got closer.“So fire girl, ready to loose your flame?” Koudo sang, this was the happiest day of his life.
I couldn’t speak. I thought of what my absence would do to Koori. My love, My life, My other half.
As I went over these last few months in my head, I was reminded ho often we should have destroyed another. Fire and ice, passionately in love.
The hunter was a bound away now. Close enough to smother my flame of a heart. I could hear his heartbeat, the muddy blood that raced through his veins. Then, the hunter lunged.
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Here you go, "I have a child? My mind backed to that night. What a wonderful night it was. I felt such a bliss as i spent the night with my love. I could feel his heart as i layed on his cool chest. I remembered sitting up and looking at his face. Smiling as he slept next to me. His breathing relaxed and soothing to my ears. His beautiful face. His dark hair covering most of his forehead and slightly over his eyes. Then a flash of a bright blue. I heard a scream and then nothing. At that moment i opened my eyes only to be staring straight into his blue golden yes. Tears were streaming from them. Then his eyes drifted to my hand, which laid on my stomach. "Faia, my ...love. Is it true?" oh to hear his voice His lovely deep voice...... (here ya go i hope you like if not i tried my best ^_^)
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okay here ya go, "Then, the hunter lunged. I closed my eyes and i felt cold. It wasn't the cold that i felt when i was with Koori, no it was like having frost bite. but it wasn't on my body it felt like my heart. And then I felt a warmth, like something inside me was growing, growing stronger than ever. It continued until i felt on fire. Fire! Yes my fire! I had regained all my strength. Yet it was so different it felt like a cold fire, if such a thing could exist? But something inside me was causing it. I felt a sharp pain in my stomach. Then something moved inside me? I have a child?" This is what i saw. Sorry if you don't like it or doesn't fit with your story its just an idea. 
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omg sooo awsome!
im still trying to figure it out but i might try to incorperate these into it somwhere.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE THEM||!
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Your welcome! I happy to have helped! 
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omg im so STUCK! My story is going no where thanks to this perfectly timed spell of writers block. Im still trying to find another way to introduce Koori. any ideas?
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none at the moment i always have the same problems! I'll take another look and give an opinion!
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