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Samicus — Last Night
Published: 2005-06-29 23:19:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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Description Encroaching leaves on
long limb branches
Reaching toward the sun and stances
Don’t blink
you’ll miss it
I’ll be waiting for you
Missing it as well
and you.
In your sugarcoated magic stride
the truth despite
those like you who bide
their time and glanced
like last night
we danced.
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Comments: 6

SunscapeWings [2005-07-06 05:12:08 +0000 UTC]

last night eh? *nudges, makes rude hand gestures*

hm. I'm glad you had a dance. I bet it was tantalizing madness sam-face.

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Samicus In reply to SunscapeWings [2005-07-07 01:19:23 +0000 UTC]

tantalizing madness... hehe. Indeed.

A dance... or three.

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lai-pixie [2005-07-04 02:29:44 +0000 UTC]

oooh, pretty poem sam.

i like the lines:

Don’t blink
you’ll miss it
I’ll be waiting for you
Missing it as well
and you.


so sweet! and the stride. even the word stride brings a picture to mind, and you used it well.

pretty poem sam.

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Samicus In reply to lai-pixie [2005-07-04 15:12:55 +0000 UTC]

thank you. i think it's still got some issues, but I'm glad you like it.

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brenorb [2005-06-29 23:45:50 +0000 UTC]

It's open! Believe me
Nice poem!

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Samicus In reply to brenorb [2005-06-30 01:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha.. thanks.

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