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Samicus — The Everclock
Published: 2005-06-21 20:57:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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In betweensand leafy queens
sway harshly in the wind
but all the things that they began
will fail to wither in the end
for they stop
a single drop
of saline life and fear
for the previous time ahead
the future yesteryear
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Comments: 4
it's all rhymey= not sam-face-y.
I really like it, but I wouldn't have guessed it to be yours.
I like leafy queens.
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Glad you like it, though!
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it seems like a totally different poem without the backing. i dont prefer either, like both, btu you know. that really isnt a critique. :S
i really enjoy the way your writing flows, like your brain is on a swing when your putting it down. or the readers brain is on a swing while reading, wah/er. its a pretty poem
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