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Published: 2006-07-13 06:35:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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I walk along this road of lifePeople coming up to me
Promising hope
Yet always pushing me a bit away
But they let me walk along with them
Talking and treading about
Chatting about all the little bits of life
But never with me
They tell stories about to each other
They whisper their little inside jokes
They chuckle about their games
As they thrust me further away
Soon they are just ghosts
Voices on the wind
The cold ground and their chilling wind rips all feeling from me
All alone
No one that cares
Except that one who was always there
That voice on the wind that never left
The ghostly figure that caught me when I stumbled
Gave me hope
Gives me light
Swirling in the mist around me
He flows through me
He knows my deepest pain
And sends one for me
Alone in my despair
A single hand appears
Callused and worn
Yet it radiating more warmth than the whole world
Slowly it reaches for me
Promising me so much more
A trick
Someone else trying to hurt me
With heaving sobs I push the hand away
No one really loves me
But the hand returned
This time with an arm that rapped around me
A fire soon burned within me
And turned to face this man
His back was scared and bloody
His body bruised and beaten
A crown of thorns on his head
And holes in his hand
My legs went weak
And my sobs doubled
I fell to me knees
As I struggled to speak
With great care he knelt down
He plucked me from the ground
Holding me against his chest
He whispered βI am always thereβ
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Comments: 4
G-Go [2006-08-06 01:32:51 +0000 UTC]
We all forget He's out there sometimes... and He always finds ways to remind us...
nice work, very heartfelt.
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semievilchicky [2006-07-14 07:58:02 +0000 UTC]
Wow... I poem that I may completely understand... That's unusual! Nice job! Not the happiest emotion... but it is very clearly stated in the poetry ^_^;
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Samper In reply to semievilchicky [2006-07-14 22:00:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I but I hoped that the ending would have more hope than I guess it did. Leave the reader with a happier mood. Because it was basicly about how life can just be shit sometimes, but you know that no matter what you do, the Lord will always be there for you.
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semievilchicky In reply to Samper [2006-07-15 06:46:21 +0000 UTC]
Well, with you anyways... Some of us have a dimmer outlook on life I suppose ^_^; I guess I'm just not your key audience
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