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Part 1 of a 2 part Sci Fi weight gain story.Related content
Comments: 13
Lardmeister [2012-11-26 03:40:39 +0000 UTC]
I like this story a lot. Much respect for your unbridled creativity.
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samster2 In reply to Lardmeister [2012-11-28 21:59:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! There will be more posted over the weekend.
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Spann19 [2012-11-24 23:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Hope we get to see a flashback to when she was still just a skinny intern staring out at the corporation
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samster2 In reply to Spann19 [2012-11-28 21:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Yes...kind of...she was in the Corporate Worlds Navy but "outgrew" her role
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Spann19 In reply to samster2 [2012-11-29 01:13:38 +0000 UTC]
Very Interesting well hope we get a look at her from that period of life
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samster2 In reply to Spann19 [2012-12-02 16:14:42 +0000 UTC]
It will kind of be mentioned in this story but I think she's a fun character so another story should follow on.
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Spann19 In reply to samster2 [2012-12-02 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]
Very glad to hear it. I know how a woman could transform from an athletic navel executive into a super sized corporate beauty is something I want to learn more about
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Onion88 [2012-11-24 21:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Great setup - very interested to see how this develops. I note that in this world, there is no stigma for being fat. Well, other than the reminders from the skinny secretary. It makes a change from your previous work where there has been the implied guilty aspect of being overweight. I rather like the forbidden fruit angle of fatness, so I'll be interested to see how it works out in a world where this does not apply.
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samster2 In reply to Onion88 [2012-11-24 21:42:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comment - funny the challenge for writing this one is it doesn't have the forbidden fruit angle because being fat is conventionally "hot". To an extent thats why Jack is from a system where fat is not hot - but keeping the edginess is tricky without that guilt angle to play on.
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Onion88 In reply to samster2 [2012-11-24 23:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Well i'll be eager to see where you go with it. I do generally very much enjoy the guilt aspect of WG fiction, but it is nice to mix it up. I think that you're onto a winner with a skinny secretary to keep some perspective in play to remind us how large/out of shape the corporate women are by comparison. You have a talent for plot, pacing and character that is nicely backed up by strong execution; in short, if anyone can make this fly, it's you.
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samster2 In reply to NiuLong [2012-11-24 21:41:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks...this is a two part story with the second part on the way.
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