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Published: 2009-10-14 15:17:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 985; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 29
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Sorry about thatim so bad in animation..
First animation in Animation Shop 3
Those are animation sketches of animal-like things:
walk 1, bird(stork like),short walk cyrcle of birg(pigeon)
and foxlike animal.
Waiting for critiques very much!
Thanks for watching.
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Comments: 38
JeaTay [2009-11-06 08:33:08 +0000 UTC]
Some nice stuff in there! You just need to take the time to 'solidify' it. (make volumes and details consistent)
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haffri [2009-10-22 00:46:03 +0000 UTC]
Wydaje mi sie, ze sa calkiem niezle, ale ciezko to ocenic, bo troche za malo widac. Mysle, ze moglabys powtarzac cykle wiecej razy, np po 10-15 szybkich krokow (chociaz troche strzelam), a klatki, ktore sie nie ruszaja, przetrzymywac troche dluzej? Jesli chod jest szybki, po 5 krokach trudno nawet powiedziec, czy ruch jest plynny, a zbyt krotkie wstrzymanie nieruchomej klatki tez utrudnia ocene ruchu, ktory mial miejsce przed nia.
Ale, na ile mozna to ocenic, wygladaja strasznie fajnie
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sandaasu-fox In reply to haffri [2009-10-22 19:13:32 +0000 UTC]
DziΔkuje Ci bardzo za krytykΔ
Postaram sie to wszystko poprawiΔ,
na razie jestem bardzo poczΔ
tkujaca
mam nadzieje ze w przyszΕoΕci bΔdzie lepiej.
Dziekuje rΓ³wniez za miΕe sΕowa!
Naprawde ciesze sie ze sie choc troche podoba, bo naprawde nie spodziewalam sie
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CottonConfection [2009-10-16 09:20:32 +0000 UTC]
They're sketchy, but so fluid! You're amazing!
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sandaasu-fox In reply to CottonConfection [2009-10-16 13:38:56 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
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She-Beast [2009-10-16 02:35:20 +0000 UTC]
Np- the stork is fantastic!! It looks as if you've used rotoscope. Hope to see more animation
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sandaasu-fox In reply to She-Beast [2009-10-16 13:48:51 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!!
I glad you like it
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Kastia [2009-10-15 22:20:38 +0000 UTC]
Bad!?
No! The are incredible! Their so loose and fluid! Keep it up!
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sandaasu-fox In reply to Oddweird [2009-10-15 17:58:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for this comment
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DeepFade [2009-10-14 21:21:44 +0000 UTC]
I love this! Nice use of simple shapes and movement that captures personality!
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sandaasu-fox In reply to DeepFade [2009-10-15 18:00:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
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Rizzadae [2009-10-14 20:39:59 +0000 UTC]
I have to say, the sketchiness to the animals, and your style works so well with movement its hard not to want to animate it X3
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sandaasu-fox In reply to Rizzadae [2009-10-15 18:01:08 +0000 UTC]
Omg!! Thank you very much!!
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MVTPhotography [2009-10-14 19:43:47 +0000 UTC]
This is very good. You have an obvious talent in natural movement. I wish I had an animation program. Or time to draw for that matter. I love all of the characters and I agree with lilwyverngirl about the different animals. One thing to think about for your next animation is to add some more details but without sacrificing the fluidity that you have hear. Great work!
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sandaasu-fox In reply to MVTPhotography [2009-10-15 18:21:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!!
I will try to makeing some with detail
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Naughty-Dog [2009-10-14 19:28:26 +0000 UTC]
ah this is awesome!!! :'D
I love it! Its so funny to look at you did a great job. really. β₯
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lilwyverngirl [2009-10-14 18:29:29 +0000 UTC]
Pretty cool! I really like how you branched out to different animals rather than keeping to one type. :3 That's very talented! The only thing I can think of that could use some improvement is when the fox sits down (if it's the same cycle as when it was walking). It looks a little jerky to me. But to be honest, it's hard to critique a sketch animation as it's much harder to see areas that are choppy or need improvement because of the sketchy frame is rough itself.
I've always wanted to try animation, but I don't have a program to work in I can only do frame by frame in Studio 8.
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sandaasu-fox In reply to lilwyverngirl [2009-10-15 18:19:41 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for advices and your opinion
In will try to change all mistakes.
I have got only a trial of this program, after 30 days it will be end.
If you interest, this is a link where i was download this programm:
[link]
This page is in polish but Animation shop is in english
If you wont to try download it, you must to click the button
where is write: "pobierz program"
If you will be have any questions about this, you can write to me
Sorry for my english:/
Thanks for all once again
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lilwyverngirl In reply to sandaasu-fox [2009-10-16 20:24:24 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome :3
I might give it a try sometime. I don't have any free time right now though, so I'll have to wait for a day when I'm not working. Thanks for the link though!
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sandaasu-fox In reply to lilwyverngirl [2009-10-16 20:25:14 +0000 UTC]
No problem really
I hope it will be can to download
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sandaasu-fox In reply to Lora-Pedigree [2009-10-15 18:22:08 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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Lora-Pedigree In reply to sandaasu-fox [2009-10-15 18:35:07 +0000 UTC]
You are welcome!
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GoldDarkShadow [2009-10-14 16:29:00 +0000 UTC]
those are awesome. i might get me the animation shop 3 to practice animation with.
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sandaasu-fox In reply to GoldDarkShadow [2009-10-15 18:35:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you a lot!!
I must to practice because i have a trial of this programm.
I thik practice is very helpful
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sandaasu-fox In reply to Onyttig [2009-10-15 18:37:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you a lot!
I true i dont remember..one day, but i have only a trial so after 30 days this programm will be ended:/
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