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That was the wrong size a second ago, damn you deviantart.I'm so sorry this took so long, but [insert dumb excuse here, because it was nothing else but Battlefield...eh.]
Let's see:
Excuse for finishing this so late? Check!
Dumb remark about not being able to design clothes? -Sorry, I can't think of anything but these curl thingies. Check!
Note on the comic style? - Oh yeah, tried some things out regarding placing of speech bubbles, lines and the layers. This page was kind of one large experiment. Check!
Oh and also, the next one's totally gonna go kinda nsfw-ish. Anyone here who know about the rules for mature content and what I can't show without a warning? Anyone?
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Comments: 14
Sofie3387 [2014-05-17 12:48:03 +0000 UTC]
'sure as death'. Oh yeah. Glad to see you publishing again ^^ your pages are always a good read!
About mature content... well it's kinda hard to say. I've seen a lot of dirty stuff around that was kept on dA, while I heard stories about stuff taken down that didn't really have a lot of shocking things in it. I'm told that if the characters you're drawing aren't legally allowed sex during the official series, they can make a problem out of this. Which is sadly the case for EdWin . I've been publishing rather spicy work for some time though, and while it's very clear what they're doing I don't show the details. And I've been spared for some years now. But maybe I'm just lucky, who knows. I've got one in the making with more naked and I'm planning on putting part of the drawing here with a link on another site with the uncensored version. I've seen other artists do that, or place underwear/black boxes before the parts in question.
Anyway, good luck with the page, I'm looking forward to it (anyway... even if it's not nsfw... really )
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Sandrenny In reply to Sofie3387 [2014-05-25 10:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much for your advice!
By now I decided to defuse it, just to be safe. I'm not really in the mood of getting in any trouble
Deviantart, always the killjoy!
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DarbyLucy [2014-05-07 09:07:07 +0000 UTC]
AHH! I love your artwork so much!! Your style is so similar to Brotherhood, and it looks fantastic.
(I may have told you that already, but oh well!
) I can't wait to see the next page!
As for nsfw-ish stuff, I'd say as long as you don't blatantly show bare genitalia or full-on boobs, you should be in the clear. Hinting at sexual activities shouldn't get you in trouble.
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Sandrenny In reply to DarbyLucy [2014-05-08 15:09:45 +0000 UTC]
ASDFGHJ THANK YOU SO MUCH~
I'm really disappointed with my latest drawing tbh. Well, not entirely. I really like the experiments with more dynamic regarding the comics structures, such as making not all lines even, having some of the panels stand before others or the placing of the speech bubbles. But I don't know. I'm so lazy when it comes to colouring (especially shading) and backgrounds are just non-existent So I'm glad to hear that you like it!
Also thank you for the advice. This whole nsfw thing is actually the reason this is taking so long (Well apart from my work at our year's graduation yearbook). I've been drawing the page now for the...third? Maybe fourth time? Just because I'm not sure if this looks acceptable in any way heh.
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DarbyLucy In reply to Sandrenny [2014-05-10 09:00:58 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome!!
Please don't put your art down so much. You should feel confident in your work, and if there's something you feel like you're not as strong in, then practice! I for one am amazed by the artwork you create.
(You're MILES ahead of me!)
Oh yeah, no prob. Although, I don't actually know the dA rules about nsfw pieces, I was just telling you what I think is allowed regarding that stuff.
From what you described though, I don't think anyone will have a problem with it.
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Sandrenny In reply to DarbyLucy [2014-05-15 21:37:08 +0000 UTC]
Argggggggggggggh you're making me blush! I really appreciate such nice feedback
And I wouldn't say miles ahead, really! I'm too lazy to improve or put more time into it, so you'll run past me in no time
There isn't much to catch up to after all.
You know, since I finally finished my work at the yearbook I'll have some time to draw the rest of this comic here. Mind if I sent you the sketches (as soon as I have some I'm mostly satisfied with haha) for you to look at? I'm really unsure about it :'D
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DarbyLucy In reply to Sandrenny [2014-05-16 06:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Aww, YOU'RE SO SWEET OMG YES OF COURSE!! I WOULD LOVE TO SEE THE SKETCHES!!
I'm sure they look amazing, but I'll give you some constructive feedback if you'd like.
Are you going to need my email address or anything?
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Sandrenny In reply to DarbyLucy [2014-05-16 19:53:04 +0000 UTC]
I'd love to hear what you think about it
I'll send you a note ^___^
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