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Eryshta [2019-09-23 12:54:17 +0000 UTC]

J'aime beaucoup la compo

Je rejoint ce que la personne du groupe de critique a dit plus haut : il faudrait soit recadrer l'image comme elle l'a dit, soit, si tu prend le parti de laisser les spirales du bloc dessin sur l'image, faire en sorte qu'on voit le bloc en entier.

(Purée si ça continue tu vas me battre à plate couture pour les visages T_T)

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BeckyKidus [2019-09-05 12:19:57 +0000 UTC]

A short critique from

Awesome work - I love the expression, and the way you drew the hair is also great! I also like how dark you made the darkest areas - not getting the darks dark enough is a very common problem, but that's certainly not the case here! I also like the concept here - as the title says, it's both Anakin and Vader.

To the things you could improve. The first thing actually has nothing with the artwork to do - but take a better photo. Crop of any unnecessary edges (in this case the empty space in the bottom and the edge of the sketch pad on the top). Also get the colors/hues right - the white paper looks medium grey now.

To the artwork itself - I would work a bit more on the shading. Right now you have huge areas with the same color, which makes the drawing look a bit flat. This is fine if that's your style (as digital cell shading - although that typically has lineart as well). If your goal is realism, however, get more detail - there are usually a lot of small shadows and details which can break up those areas. If you look at a reference photo you will notice this, especially if you also turn the reference into black and white.

But all in all this is a very good drawing! Keep it up!

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Alexsherwood2000 [2019-08-31 16:22:45 +0000 UTC]

AWSOME.

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