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Hi you found mistake tell me because English isn't my natural language
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Hi! I found a couple of mistakes, respectfully pointing them out:
"Dinner is served."
"I learned about your brother..."
"the deal you had to make"
"Don't say such things"
"few people are capable of doing what you do"
"if only I hadn't told... if only I'd listened to my bro.. if only I had tried to... none of this would have happened!"
Your comic is awesome!
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"Tu ne comprends pas comment je suis un frère horrible ?! JE LAISSE LUIGI SE FAIRE TORTURER EN JOUANT À BARBIE SUR DS !"
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Oui c'est vrai que ca doit etre la pire chose qu'il a jamais laissé faire
Hi,
This is really cool, and your art is really cute too! I'm excited to read more of this and find out how the gang gets out of this problem!
Also to say English isn't your native language you've got a really good grasp on it, there's a few hiccups but that's to be expected so my hat goes off to you!
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Thanks a lot,i'm really really glad you say this . and thanks a lot it's mean the world too me someone say i'm good ^^
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No problem! Also when you upload new pages, I'll let you know if there's any errors in the dialogue if you want!
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It's supposed to be "didn't tell", not "haven't tell". Glad to be of service.
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Fix it whenever, it's not a big problem
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