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Published: 2016-11-08 03:07:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 865; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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redraw of this because i love redrawsCRITIQUE ME PLZZ I NEED HELP ALDKFJALJGKA
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RoseSharks [2016-11-08 21:38:54 +0000 UTC]
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Woah, okay first off this is amazing! I adore the dull reddish brown colors used; it gives the peice such a nice atmosphere. I also like how the characters stand out against the background. The white highlights on Ivypool and Hawkfrost make them pop out and is just a really neat effect.
There's only a few things I see that could use some improvement:
In my opinion, Ivypool's 'eyelashes' seem a bit clunky— like they could use a bit more shading on them to blend in with the rest of the peice. Again, the blood on Ivypool's shoulder seems flat too. Maybe you could have added some shading under the blood drips to make it stand out more.
Overall I really enjoy this peice and I can see so much improvement from your old one. The shading, proportions, color usage and style have all become much better!
Great job on this! <3
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sapfall In reply to RoseSharks [2016-11-09 03:48:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the awesome critique!
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