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Published: 2012-05-03 16:44:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 1994; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 8
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I did a werewolf error so I decided to do a vampire one as well.Just tell me if your character is male or female and mine will be the opposite gender.
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She only looks more fiercely toward him. "I said I was going to help you. Now just let me help you!" She's on the bridge of tears but she won't be told no. Crawling next to him she flinches at the sight of his fangs. "I'm going to help you. Just let me help you." At the moment she decides that it would be worth it. That it would all be fine.
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Vayne looks at her blankly, his eyes completely red now. There were no whites in his eyes or pupils, just red all over. It seems like he's very close to snapping, "Why...though?" he says softly, as if breathlessly, even though he doesn't need to breathe, "I can...tell...that you are...scared..."
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"Because you need help. I help whoever I can. You are included Vayne." She bits her lips nervously while gently grabbing ahold of one if his hands. "I'm going to help you. Just let me help you." Curling her other hand around with it's twin. "Because your not a monster. I won't believe them."
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"Not...like..." He stopped, his head dropping down and his hand moves out of hers. His nails begin to lengthen and get sharper. His hisses lowly as he lifts his head up to look at her again, a predatory look in his eyes. His instincts have taken over him.
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She flinches slightly at the sight of the sharpening nails, never looking up at his eyes, as she silently gripped a hand again with caution. "You promised me not to do nothing stupid Vayne." Tears flow down her cheeks freely as her heart raged further against he body.
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(sorry if this sounds like I'm playing your character here, but that's not my intention ok?)
He hisses again as he pulls his hand out of hers and suddenly pins her down. He wasn't thinking clearly anymore and he first licked the tears from her eyes then suddenly bites down hard on her neck and starts gulping down her blood...to the point she blacks out.
When she wakes up again she feels a searing pain on her neck and is too weak to move, mainly due to the amount of blood she lost. It's night, and she's in some kind of cave. Vayne's there as well on the other side of the cave with his head down and melancholy. Her neck is has been treated, and her head was laying on some clothes with a type of cover over her to keep her warm.
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It was a sharp tingle down her throat. Like something had pressed a knife on the inside of it. Something was off. Something very bad was off. "Vayne...? What.... Happened....?" That look wasn't helping the feeling of dread slowly encasing her.
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"...you're awake..." he said in what sounded like a guilty tone, "...how...how are you feeling?" Though he's pretty sure that he already knows the answer to that.
(he didn't change her, just saying)
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(She's just freaking out a little....)
"Hurts a lot...." Boy oh boy that tone didn't make it any better. "Earlier happened didn't...?" A tingle went down her spine. Tears flooded her face as she sat up, doing her best to ignore the pain, while she stared at him. "Please Vayne explain what happened....." Explain why they don't seem to like me or you.
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Vayne approaches her and pushes her down gently back to the floor, "Lay down...you're too weak to sit up Lilith..." He's avoiding eye contact with her, hating himself for what he did to her, and not wanting to see her cry, "Just...rest for now, please..."
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She grabs onto his chest before nuzzling her nose against it. It's all that's keeping her from fainting at that point. "Tell me what happened. Why it happened. I need to know...." Because I'm more scared if not knowing anything after earlier. "Just answer please then I'll rest..."
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Vayne holds her gingerly, "I will explain, but you must rest first. Those people just hate all vampire, good or bad, thinking we're monsters. They didn't like you for liking me. That is all I will say for now, so please just rest. I don't want to have to knock you out just to get you to rest."
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It makes sense. Such terrible sense to her. "When I wake up you have to explain why you licked me first." Settling herself against his chest she let out a small blissful sigh. Tears poured a little still but it was stopping slowly but surely. At least she understood some of it even if it was cruel.
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"..." He wasn't sure what she meant by licking, since he actually doesn't remember it. He lays her down and covers her up again, leaving her to rest.
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When she finally wakes up light is peaking it's way through. Turning in her side, not even bothering to open her eyes, as she speaks softly "Vayne the deal....." Ouch moving still hurts. She wanted to know as much as she could.
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"..." Vayne didn't answer her, as he was now sleeping himself. He was a vampire afterall, and he sleeps during the day. He was farther back into the cave so the sunlight wouldn't hit him, but there was food next to Lilith so she would have something to eat.
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She groaned slightly as she lifted her body up into a sitting position. There was a half debate to go and poke him awake but decided against it. Looking at the scattered variety if fruit next to her with a twisted expression if pain. Her stomach was flipping to much to try.
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Vayne wakes up at sunset, but he doesn't come out from the back of the cave, in deep thought right now.
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Looking at him, hurting slightly less than before, as she edged herself closer. "Vayne you need to explain it better. What happened earlier and why this is all happening now."
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"...what is the last thing you remember?" he replies quietly.
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"Your eyes had gone completely red and I was holding one of your hands. You pushed me away and started licking away my tears before......" She was shaking like a leaf, warm tears pouring down her cheeks again, as she curled up slightly in her spot. She was getting scared to many times today.
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"...I don't remember licking your tears." He sighs, and looks away, "I blacked out, and I don't remember what happened after I tried pushing you away again. All I remember is what happened when I regained myself."
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"Scary thought. Um what are we going to do now?" Because obviously staying in the cave would be murder for. She needed to get back out again.
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"We're going to stay here until you recover and restore the blood...I took. No one can reach us here, so you continue to rest."
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((I am a girl))
I run over to him as fast as I can "are you ok"
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Vayne: *pushes her away from him* "S-Stay away from me..." *looks away* "No...blood...in a week..."
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"witch is why you need blood now" *trys to get near him*
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Vayne: "I...don't want...to take yours..." *doesn't want to hurt her*
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Alice:"I will be Fine I want to help you"
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Karra, a fifteen year old human female with purple eyes and dark brunette hair with a purple stripe in the bangs... 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Asks what is going on.
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Vayne looks weak and hungry, his eyes glowing bright red. "Stay away...no blood...in a week..."
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"O-oh..." she pauses, but then comes closer, as close as she thinks she can get safely. "Vayne... I... uhm. Would it help if... uhm." she paused, "If you drank from me...?" she hesitated, holding almost perfectly still.
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He looks away from her, "I...don't want...to hurt you."
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She hesitated, but then came closer, kneeling by him. "I trust you... I don't think you'll hurt me." she said, starting to undo the chains as best she could.
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Vayne pushes her away from him, "I don't even...trust myself..." he pants, and turns away from her.
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She pauses, but then frowns determinedly and goes right back to undoing the chains. "It's okay, I don't mind... You need it."
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(sorry for the late response. It's been a while since I did this error)
He hisses softly, meaning no harm in it and he pushes her away again, "I don't...want to hurt you."
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She frowned. "I r-really don't mind! Honestly!" she sat back, and it was obvious she was very worried about Vayne.
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Can you use Vayne again please?
I slowly approached them wanting to set them free.
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I thought I answered this?
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"Stay away from me!" He looks away, "No blood...in a week. I...don't want to hurt you."
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"Vayne.. You need blood. Please let me help you."
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Vayne looks away, not wanting to hurt his friend and being stubborn about it. He needs the blood, but he doesn't want to hurt her, "No..."
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"Vayne, please stop being stubborn. If you don't drink soon, you'll die. I can't let you die!"
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"I'm not...going to die. Technically, I...am already dead."
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"I need to get you out of here. Please drink my blood. I don't care if you drain me. Please!" I begged.
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"I, don't want to drain you."
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"Just take as much as you need then. Please."
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Vayne: *being stubborn* "No."
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