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Published: 2011-12-14 12:36:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 607; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 8
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another entry for the lovely *Ignis-Pectus 's contest.
i really liked this part of the chapter and i had this image in my mind, so i really hope i drew it the way it's supposed to seem like!
i wanted it to be like a story page, or a manga.. it doesn't really look like a manga page as i wanted.. but o well. i hope it's still acceptable. D:
and plz read from left to right. :3
hope you guys like it! and wish me luck~ ｡◕‿◕｡
and i didn't really know what to choose for a title, so i hope this one doesn't sound lame.
;this is an illustrator for this part of the story:
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While she waited, she sat on a bench that was at the station. Once again the pleasant wind whistled in her ears and she closed her eyes for a few seconds. When she opened her eyes slightly and looked at herself down, she saw a paper that was located right in front of her. Carefully, she bent down and picked it up. It was a candy wrapper. She stared at it for a few seconds and then finally threw it angrily into the garbage, standing beside the bench. Sweets were the last, what she wanted to see at the moment. It reminded her too much on the past time and she wanted to finish with it.
chapter 11 - forever your toy.
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if you like, and don't hesitate to comment~ 
my other contest entry:
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Comments: 19
your style is so cute! I really like all those colors on the lineart. Awesome job!
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aww thank you
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love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
she looks beautiful
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okay dear this time i have to give you a really REALLY BIG!
compliment
This little comic illustrates the scene so well and nice seriously
such an fantastic picture dear
thank you so much for joining the contest a second
time it means a lot to me my dear friend
you're a doll
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aww i'm so happy you liked it!
i really did my best trying to capture her expressions as i imagined it and i'm so glad you liked it ;w;
and you're welcome dear! and you're like, the best ever
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Not bad, but you have to keep a line between mouths and noses or the character gets a sort of snout, her thumb is too short for those fingers, her eye is too far off to the left (her right) in that top panel, and there's a scaling flaw of her head being a little too big and her body being a little too slender.
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first, thank you for the criticize
about the thumb i wanted it that way coz i'm seeing it from another angel, like.. i want it to be a little to the inside. i don't know how to explain it xD sorry if i didn't show it the way i wanted.
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Well, the thumb looks freakishly tiny, not withdrawn or bent, and look at her mouth relative to her eyes. See how much farther out it is?
And no, her eye is too far out on the panel to the right.
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i'll work more on them next time then! 83
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