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Description First off, this is 's oc's shikai. I did a design-up on a picture he sent me.

This is his oc's shikai:
Its release command is " Intercept, Midnight Void" - [Setsuju, Mayonaka Garandou].


so... hope you like it
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Comments: 56

sarzill In reply to ??? [2011-02-05 21:23:08 +0000 UTC]

hehe np, i've been locked up in the army since we last talked (minus 1 week) so it doesn't matter, + ur not obligted to do it. it looks awesome i gave moonlit a call, so u might get some feedback from him aswell

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-05 21:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Already got it, he was faster than you.

He says he wants the tip as you drew it...what's your opinnion?

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-05 21:47:35 +0000 UTC]

hehe donno when he sent u, but i could have done it yesterday but was too sleepy

hmm its up to him to decide as its his zanp, but mine is a little bit to easy on the curve/hole (it should be a bit wider imo) based on the one u did, i would continue the curve instead of making it go straight like a fork.

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-05 21:55:22 +0000 UTC]

Ah, so you mean that the tips should curve in a little bit? I made it like this because you said it to hold down people at their neck without cutting off their heads...so I made it 20 cms wide and deep. But you're right, it looks a bit forky...

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-05 21:59:55 +0000 UTC]

not curve in, but instead of continuing straigth forward maybe stop where it starts to become straight?

so that the outter line curve more inwards and intercept the inner curve before it will reach the enemy's neck. its a large sword u know

ah and the wow sword thing. im not sure which sword ur talking about, i should cuz i play wow. but wow got uncountable sword designs and its not strange if this kind of fantasy sword pull the wow feeling

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-05 22:29:53 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm, ok, I'll do a lttle tweaking, lets see what turns up.

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-05 22:42:12 +0000 UTC]

u should't do anything until u've discussed with moonlit, its his zanp also. it pains me to see u having to redo the pictures and even doing so many at once. u should do lines/sketches and put in scrap so i can see them, then give feedback so u can change before putting up too much effort

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-05 23:29:07 +0000 UTC]

It's no problem doin these pics, it's a simple thing of repositioning the model and hitting the "Export 2D image" button.

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-05 23:30:27 +0000 UTC]

ah okey

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-05 23:35:40 +0000 UTC]

And makeing the whole sword took me about 3 hours, 1 hour for main form, 1 hour for the runes and 1 hour for finding the right colors and coloring it.

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-05 23:39:16 +0000 UTC]

aha. well, thats not too much i use longer for what i do, tho im bad and i waste time XD

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-06 00:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Well, having your picture help a damn lot...

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-06 00:19:49 +0000 UTC]

i guess Xd

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-06 00:34:49 +0000 UTC]

No, it really helped a lot, 'cause creating something from description only is incredibly HARD.

By the way: This is the sword from WoW I meant. [link]

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2011-02-06 00:47:43 +0000 UTC]

hehe XD good.

ah.its the..brutal sword? its ugly as f'''' i can see that you may find similarities but its only the end, and well there aren't that many ways to make a end with a curve in the middle

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2011-02-06 00:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, yeah...was a random thought anyways, don't worry about it.

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Ryuseimaru [2010-12-24 11:41:43 +0000 UTC]

So this is it? Shouldn't be much of a problem...

The only thing I might need a few days to complete are the runes...are the 3D or just flat on the surface?

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2010-12-24 11:46:42 +0000 UTC]

yeah , it would be awesome ah, np ^^ uhm, the runes are carved(not deep) into the metal and they glow( use this picture as ref: [link] ). i slapped the 3d effect cuz it would look cooler. (cuz im not good with photoshop )

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 11:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Ah, ok, so they're carved into the surface and the sword is glowing from the inside?

A color-map would be great. Text is fine as well...the DeathKnight pic kinda confused me...

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2010-12-24 12:18:08 +0000 UTC]

just carved a little down and the bottom is filled with some ink-like? stuff that glows.

color map ?

nvm it then ill try explain it.

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 12:22:35 +0000 UTC]

What I meant was:
Give me a color discription of it.

Or should I just stay with the pic?

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2010-12-24 12:29:20 +0000 UTC]

aha, the only colors are the handle,hilt+metal and the glow/signs.

you can use that as a color description. the hilt-color is supposed to be bronze?

for color u can stay with the picture, or you can actually ask cuz i did it for him

if u meant the carvings. as i said its carved down, not too deep but a little, the blade is quite thick. the "walls" are not colored(carving walls) only the ground. and thats what glows.

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 12:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Ok, now to the name. What is the actual name?

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sarzill In reply to Ryuseimaru [2010-12-24 12:51:26 +0000 UTC]

there, i fixed it now, it says in the picture and i fixed the translation: Setsuju, Mayonaka Garandou - Intercept ,Midnight Void.

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Ryuseimaru In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Ok, saved it to my ref files.

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MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 11:14:08 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes. Yes. Very yes. That's just how I want it Great job.

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 11:16:42 +0000 UTC]

np ^^ im glad you liked it ... thats my first real "request" so i really appriciate you liking it, + i like it myself XD now we gotta design the guy

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 11:19:20 +0000 UTC]

^~^

Well there is designing and having it in mind, and then there's getting it down on paper.

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 11:22:58 +0000 UTC]

that is true i had ur design in mind for days while i worked, sketched it fast while i ate in the break, home, did a proper "sketch" and finished on photoshop

lets "mind" it together then

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 11:24:10 +0000 UTC]

Just like I, in a way, have an idea of him as a person... it's putting it all together that's the problem.

Sure, but how?

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MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 07:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Buhahahaha, that's just brilliant that is! Nice interpretation of the general idea

But I have two suggestions if you'd be so kind. First I think I'll be going with "Midnight Void" [ "Mayonaka Garandou" - not sure where you got your translation? ] so I imagine that will alter at least one of the symbols (they actually do mean stuff, yeah?)...

The other is the side blades. While I like what you've done with them, I'd like you to make a small change. The bottomest section should stay the same. The very top section too, except for extending down the blade a little bit less. Then I'd like two smaller (roughly two thirds the size of the current middle piece) blades in between the top and bottom sections to complete the design. Could you please make those changes for me?

Oh, and nice touch with the red handle, I do like that

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 10:11:45 +0000 UTC]

btw i did some research for the name of ur zanpaktou. and i found "hollowness,emptyness,void" - garandou.
"the void of space" - Unchuukuukan.


"Muko" - void.
"Munashii" - void.


Sankou - "midnight,Dead of night"
mayonaka means the same as above.
Hanshou - midnight
Juuniji - midnight


also, did you notice the curve in the middle on the top blade? isn't that just perfect to chop heads? i actually intended it to be big enought to be able to hold down/up someone by their neck without getting chopped if ur char wants it.

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 10:37:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes... so what are you trying to say here?

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 10:40:23 +0000 UTC]

that you can use whichever u want of these translations. im not sure how many options u had when you choose the ones u sent in the comment. what ims saying is that the "cling" of the name is important ^^ and you should use whatever u find best sounding. + ill use the final text in the edited picture ^^

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 10:59:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahhhh, right... so just more "options" to consider, huh? Yeah I've done some homework too on it but yes, let me have one more look to be sure.

'Void of space' doesn't quite suit... that's why I likes "garandou" because it's like his sword is hollow, it eats kido, and it's an actual object itself so it not just a plain nothingness... plus it rolls of the tongue, in a way .
"Hanshou Garandou" doesn't sound right.
For "Juuniji" I got twelve o'clock, noon, midnight... so that rules that out.
...and "Hanshou" got all manner of things besides midnight so I don't think so.
...and "Sankou" got - midnight, dead of night, the small hours
- reference, consultation
- proceeding to
-third proof

So thanks, but no. The best translation and sound would be "Setsuju, Mayonaka Garandou! [Intercept, Midnight Void!]"

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 11:06:24 +0000 UTC]

kk. ill change the text then.

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 11:08:07 +0000 UTC]

Text, picture, whatever you like

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 11:12:15 +0000 UTC]

there go check

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 11:13:05 +0000 UTC]

On the way

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 09:52:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks ^^ thanksu' i thought the signs would do good for this "dispel" ability of his^^ aha, i took what you wrote earlier to me and found translations, i ran around the internet alot. i can ofc change that the text. and no it wont alter anything atm, cuz those are just made-up stuff XD you can ask or find your own symbols tho and ask the commissher to place those.

about the blade- yes they were even longer and i changed it, the middle was also larger. i tried with two blades i didn't like it that much, but its your zanp ^^ ill try do some edits. how many "middle" blades do you want?

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 10:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Yes I agree, the look perfect ^^ Aha so they're made up I like 'em.

Oh... curious. Just like I described, basically - The bottom and top, and two middle ones just like how I said. I'm looking forward to this XD

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 10:15:45 +0000 UTC]

im glad. hehe.. ^^ yeah they are, and thanks. i actually spent time searching for other ppl's runes, but they were so boring and ugly XD could've used real runes, but it would also be a little off as its japanese and not norse or anything.

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 10:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Nah, I'm very happy with them ^^

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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2010-12-24 10:36:51 +0000 UTC]

awesome good sooo. reply my " translate" note and ill change the text and add the edited version of ur blade in the scrap ^^ it doesn't look that bad now, better actually ^^ + its what you wanted so it probably look much ebtter for u.

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2010-12-24 10:38:52 +0000 UTC]

Ummm... okay?

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Lifes-Lovely-Roses In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-01-03 02:25:48 +0000 UTC]

I may be just imagining things, but did you send me a zanpaktou similar to this and ask me to draw it?

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to Lifes-Lovely-Roses [2012-01-03 07:22:14 +0000 UTC]

It's possible, I've asked a few poeple to draw this zanpakutou and don't worry, it is all mine in the first place. I'm not...er.. good with drawing so I ask others to on my behalf

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Lifes-Lovely-Roses In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-01-03 07:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Well I remember being sent three images of a 3D version of that zanpaktou

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MoonlitCrescent In reply to Lifes-Lovely-Roses [2012-01-03 07:37:07 +0000 UTC]

Then that must have been from me.. at least it better have been. Did you draw it?

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Lifes-Lovely-Roses In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-01-03 08:21:20 +0000 UTC]

No T^T I haven't touched nay commisions/requests. This year has been utter hell with my NA class. But if you resend the info I can put it on my list of to do's

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