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its a "sketch" sheet.. so dont dare flame. suggestions are most welcome, same with opinions. yeye ino he sounds op.. but, dont dare say yamamoto isn't-- its yamamoto with bankai.Bleach oc:
first name: Takashi
last name: Ishiwaka
Race: Shinigami
Age: mid 30 ies appearence
Gender: male
Height: 1.86
Weight: ??
Body shape: slim musciline.
Likes: Peace, bird tvitter/song, life itself, nature - wind blowing, water etc. Honor, pride. etc.
Dislikes: War, Unhonest people, those who give up on, battle loving,blood crazies.
Favorite place: Sitting on the veranda looking at the koi in the pond outside the 13th div's residence.
Hairstyle: Long light-navy blue hair set up in a ponytail by a metal pincer(silver). he also has long hair infront of his ears, the hair is very well kept for beeing so long.
Division: 13th Div, Captain.
Short about him as a person: He is a very peaceful man, and he was a candidate for the Captain commander rank. that said he is one of the veteran fighter and the strongest.
He is a wise and skilled fighter, he is very good at reading and comming up with strategies fast, always thinking two steps ahead.
But if someone threatens his "family- beeing the temple gotei but especially kazuya enoki" he will lit the fire of retribution and smite them without hestination.
so- short badass Master-monk
Zanpaktou: Marisha -Ten (The Japanese queen of heaven, goddess of light, of sun and moon.)
Shikai: A monk staff with that circle n rings on. staff is made of wood and metal is gold, there is a spear head on top of the circle so it enables a little more to fight with, even thought takashi is the all time master of poled weapons within soul society he would't need so.
Bankai: Upon releasing all lights within a mile radius gets absorbed and continously siphoned. Even if the sun was at its strongest it would be dimmed to a level of a sunset.
As the light whirl around him blinding anyone in sight, When the transformation is finished a burst of light so much power that anyone lower than above-average captain lvl would completly perish as they feel the warmth of light blow past them.
A Monk bead necklace levitating behind him, shoulder blade up. it has all the directions on it and seals/notes hanging down from each with a secred guardian's name on it. Beads are held together by a rope conjured by reiatsu, u can see glimps of orange reiatsu shining through some places. And an oversized polearm/spear thing with heavy gold details and an massive mass of gold as weigth on its end for crushing.
Reiatsu: Orange
For Attacks / defense:
His Beads absorb light in any form. and kind of reiatsu/kido-energy(that give light in anyway-so fire aswell, and mostly anything.) attacks would be rendered useless against him. His Beads Appear Behind his Back as one of those monk-bead necklaces. just they have seals beneath them. (byakko etc) - wite tiger, black tortoise, yellow dragon, wirmling bird-chinese phoenix, etc.
If nessecary takashi can dispell the reiatsu rope and the beads floads independantly, The beads if tried to be destroyed have instant -light colored kido shields that can almost nullify any hit. Takashi can make these beads float around him and manipulate the forms of the shields at will, he can create walls and other stuff. And he can also shrink the balls as it will be easier to use its powers to the maximum. "foriengers" or others familiar with the saying of The shield of aegis is saying that if there ever was or is as strong as that defense it must be his.
He has an long polearm whoose weigth is tremendous and will send most people flying without even putting any "force" behind it, just a regular swing. The blade of the polearm is its biggest feature, its an very sharp blade which looks like some sort of Arrow head mixed with an axe. its heavy, can be used as crushing. its sharp and is ideal for thrusts, and cutting. the blade has a little opening on the tip leading to an large open space in the blade.
Can stomp his weighted end into the ground and creating a shockwave of light in going at incredible speed outwards and up to perish anyone it its wake.
Stomp his blade to create a "flash" bomb to blind his enemies.
he has 5 Stances, one for each guardian. each with 3 abilities.
Stance of the sacred guardian of the West, Byakko!
In this stance Takashi's strength,speed,reflexes,mobility , everything considered "power" skyrockets. To activate, Takashi strenches his arm holding the polearm in the sun, and the polearm siphones the light-force out of all the Bead's as a Light-magical orb burning/swirling in the middle of the blade as the overwhelming light rays rages about the pole and blade.
First Technique: Blade of Judgement
There will appear a orb of magical light in the middle of the blade and light rays rages around the blade. This has incredibly enhanced all his melee abilities and has the power to make under captain quality to perish in a flash of light. One could say this is the true "Hammer" of justice.
Second Technique:
Third Technique:
Stance of the Sacred guardian of the North, Genbu!
In this stance, Any "protection / Shield" Abilities defense has increased to incredible levels and its power grows on power.
First Technique:
Third Technique: Tower Shield of Ancient Retribution - The North Bead shrinks and leviates a sentimeter above his rigth wrist. A large tower shield in transparant-light energy appears with Decorated borders and in middle. It is weigthless and takashi can even "walk" through it for maximum convenience.
idea for suzaku: Have his beads into the sky, form a Circle, and light rays decend upon the ground, forming an circle of warmth and a good feeling for anyone within it as light threads forms an arcane circle and whirl around as they rapidly stabilizes ones health and slowly heals them.
His Abilities has extra power on "evil" zanpaktou's /based power-darkness n stuff. And posessions and mind tricks.
Stance of Yellow Dragon - It Enables the perfect balance between all the sacred beasts into one and takashi can use any technique at will.
Equipment:
Different kind of seals:
teleporting: A teleport between two places. The paper is destroyed once used, so none can follow unless they are teleported together. one time use. require 2 seals, can be used both ways.
Kido Seals: Seals that are specially made to absorb "magical" power. A seal can only absorb "so" much and once it reaches it limit it will be a normal paper for incomming attacks, but takashi can use it to blow off as a bomb with the amount of magical power it has absorbed.
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Comments: 25
uranoton [2012-06-24 19:50:45 +0000 UTC]
you make some of the most badass haoris (captains coats) this is really good...will u be doing assistant captains?
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MoonlitCrescent [2012-02-15 15:35:56 +0000 UTC]
Hmmmm, interesting. Obviously would be one of the senior captains. Any idea for what squad?
I like his weapon, and general abilities.
I like, best I can tell, his general looks.
I like the traits you have given him, including the general stances and such.
However:
I fear you may have made him too powerful
I don't think he should be able to heal at all with his zanpakutou, and I fear you have made him too "widespread" as a character ability wise. \
Kido is made of spiritual energy, so at best he should only be able to absorb a smaller portion of a technique.
He may be good with quick strategy, but you should be careful how you phrase that and emphasize it's mainly from experience and general intelligence. ... and unlike many oc's, he has no real flaws whatsoever.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-02-15 18:09:36 +0000 UTC]
yeah, hes captain of 13th squad.
lol..no way.
maybe absorb yes. but he would still block it
he is "old" ? so he has alot of experience, intelligence. i guess not. Does byakuya has any?
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-02-16 17:10:49 +0000 UTC]
I see...
No way... what?
The kido? maybe, but not from absorbing it.
Byakuya isn't old? Characters need flaws you know.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-02-16 22:40:46 +0000 UTC]
no way. not too op.. hes supposed to be "op" if hes equal to commander.
and his flaw is that he want to talk it out until bloodshed.. or threatening of very close ppl.
by purifying it upon contact. break it up into light particles for then to absorb some of it. (cuz its light then...)
he isn't its not what i meant.. what flaws do byakuya got? he doesn't overestimate himself. he has sick zanpaktou, he is really fast, tactics etc. so im not sure. he is supposed to be quite old, skilled,experienced so obviously he should be strong.. say he got more than 800 years of "war" and he retired? - into mr peaceful. should count for something. only stupid ichigo and his 3 days xp can do stuff like that.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-02-17 18:19:43 +0000 UTC]
You said he was 'considered' to be the CC, not that he actually is one in power.
But he still fights. :/
Maybe, but clearly it would depend on the strength of kido being used.
Pride and arrogance? Byakuya is not that old, mid to late 20's equlivalent.
Hmmmm.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-02-17 19:34:05 +0000 UTC]
i said he was offered/candidate to CC and he declined.
yeah..?
that also depends. if u have seen yamamoto's shikai.. its insane, think bankai... theres no 1-100 kido he cant take.
he wont die of pride. and arrogance he proved he will change his ways if needed.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-02-18 16:41:23 +0000 UTC]
Technically that doesn't make him as strong you know
Nevermind.
The only reason it's so insane is because he's such a freak of a shnigami that he's lived something like 2100 years ago, that's the equlivalent of someone today living to be over 200 years old. He's the most exceptional case there is, and with age come experience and in turn, truly mad power. Unless your dude is such a rediculous longshot on a chance like this, don't even bother comparing him. On my scale he'd be like 120 out of 100.
You never know, even so it's his obvious flaw. And yes he changed it one, but it took a mad amount of convincing.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-02-18 19:24:18 +0000 UTC]
it doesn't make him strong to be considered strong as a CC ?
well, mine is 110 then. cuz..the 100 is over used. as of now. every shinigami in the series that is captain or VC would rank 100 on all according to how it was when starded. He would be in looks 36-8ish. but if he was born shinigami. thats alot of time. and he may be a "genius" at that? like toshiro.. he got flaws now so that makes it "okey" to be such a redicoulus age and wield his power.. but when hes "looking 30" dont tell me he wont be insanly strong? (i hate him,but its true.. love his bankai and powers tho)
it did, and it could been his death if he met the right opponent. i dont nessecary need a healing ability, its just it works very well with the light orientated stuff.
but i dont see why i need a obvious flaw. some people are better than others.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-02-28 13:50:46 +0000 UTC]
Technically no; but he must be powerful and skilled enough for the SS that they consider him so I'm sure he is.
You know what? Forget the whole damn score thing, it's obvious you don't understand it.
Late thirties, got it. Was he born shinigami (isn't that the only way to be a proper shinigami?) I get it, he's got skills. Toshiro was a prodigy, not a genuis - but I get the point. Yes, by the time he's 30 he'll probably be a senior captain at least.
True. If you do, maybe make it so he can oly heal others perhaps?
Because it makes them more human more believable, and technically.. beatable.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-03-01 11:28:17 +0000 UTC]
well yes. they could choose a "tactician" or something that is good with politics and stuff. but most of the captains/ high officer irl have battleground experience. but the last is what i was aiming for (of what u wrote).
u rude!? XD joke.. i dont get it.. ino..
toshiro means genius... its a reason he got named that most likely. well, he is maybe not a genius as its his zanpaktou that is the epic one of the two, but he still obtained bankai in early age. im not sure. im pretty sure in some story arc or filler there was a stranded shinigami who could't remember anything from her past life or anything. and i think rangiku said that sometime shinigami's can recall memories of their past lives. do they reborn as babies but with memories of dying/beeing say 25 ?
ah, well yes i didn't mention, but that was the idea. self heal in such a great scale.. no it will be to others only if i go with heal. but its mostly cuz. i want aspect of 5 secret guardians and i want to make attacks fitting for each.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-03-03 13:26:32 +0000 UTC]
I know.
Ha, yeah.
You're thinking of the first bleach movie; and she was something unique - the memory rosary.
I've no idea, though I've always seen them as seperate from humans - like shepards, kind of.
WHat have you decided?
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-03-03 14:55:23 +0000 UTC]
ive decided to make the attacks and powers, it will belight tho. based on each sacred guardian of the japanese constellations. with the tiger,turtoise,dragonx2 and the virmling bird (the bird who equals pheonix or something.)
Tiger- power,speed,reflexes etc. turtoise beeing defense based. and so on.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-03-03 15:02:34 +0000 UTC]
Have you commissioned him?
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-03-03 18:42:14 +0000 UTC]
vinryl? i have secured a spot.
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-03-03 19:21:36 +0000 UTC]
A spot for him to be completed?
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MoonlitCrescent In reply to sarzill [2012-03-04 14:08:14 +0000 UTC]
Is one of your paid for and upcoming commissions of him?
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-03-04 15:15:37 +0000 UTC]
nope. just secured a spot.
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sarzill In reply to MoonlitCrescent [2012-03-04 18:37:26 +0000 UTC]
i have commissioned a guy who takes his time so to say. and ive secured one spot for vinryl.
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Merc-Wit-da-Mouth [2012-02-13 21:02:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow he looks pretty cool. Is he also gonna get a more detailed, finished if you will, version of him like your other OCs? Sorry kind of a stupid question but I'd like to know anyways.
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sarzill In reply to Merc-Wit-da-Mouth [2012-02-14 00:05:48 +0000 UTC]
thank you^^ well, this is me drawing, the others i paid skilled artists to do for me.. but yes, i intend to commissh this one aswell to release his maximum awesomeness
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Merc-Wit-da-Mouth In reply to sarzill [2012-02-14 01:24:27 +0000 UTC]
Your welcome, and I totally can't wait.
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