HOME | DD

Published: 2017-04-18 20:53:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1151; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
Redirect to original
Description
I made this smol gif cause I wanted to test my tweening.Time: 1-3 hours
Oc: Summer (Belongs to me)
Programs used: Paint Tool Sai, WLMM, and Ezimba(website)
Related content
Comments: 8
Kabegane [2017-04-18 21:05:23 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
VISION: Really nice, but you should have added it a background and to fix the pixelated outlines in the outside of the .gif and added it a bit of shading so people are able to notice the perspective is tridimentional.
There's also a little error in the right eyeline, when she/he blinks there's a small white dot popping up and sometimes the ear layers are too visible when he/she's blinking or when the ears starts to move.
However, on the other side, the drawing is really great, creative, and you have a bright future in deviantart e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/bโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title="
(Big Grin)"/>, i hope you take my critique correctly.
๐: 0 โฉ: 1
SassySlinky In reply to Kabegane [2017-04-19 07:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Heyo! Thanks for the critique! I rarely get them, so it always feels nice to get them. (Except the meme ones like spamming words in the thing and giving it automatically 5 stars) I will admit, this was a bit rushed due to getting this done for a school project in my art class. Next time, I will take better note on attention to detail. Though, about the pixeled outlines, it's a glitch. DeviantArt has been messing up with that for some time now, and I'm still finding ways to solve it. So unfortunately, you'll have to deal with it. Anywho, thank you. I will try to work slower on my gifs and try solving the dumb pixel glitch. ^^
๐: 0 โฉ: 0
electriccanine [2017-04-18 22:36:02 +0000 UTC]
๏ผโงโโฆ๏ผ๏ผโงโโฆ๏ผ๏ผโงโโฆ๏ผ๏ผโงโโฆ๏ผso cuuuuuute
๐: 0 โฉ: 0