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sasuchick33 — For Eternity
Published: 2008-08-06 01:02:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 210; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Nothingness.................
A black abyss of cold loneliness.
Lifeless.........empty
Like how I've felt since you left.
Life wasn't fair
  ...not like it ever is.
But this time.... this time......
  The hurt feels so much worse.
'Cause you made me believe
   in all your stupid lies.
Made me believe
    that all WE had to do was try.
But now I've suffocated,
     .......chocked on the very hope you gave me.
And babe, like me
         time doesn't forgive.
So.....I'll sit, suffocating to nothingness
    Cursing your name
.......................................for eternity.
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Comments: 8

ViejoBabasama [2008-08-15 22:09:47 +0000 UTC]

I enjoyed the poem. I can feel your pain.
Keep writing.

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sasuchick33 In reply to ViejoBabasama [2008-08-17 00:17:34 +0000 UTC]

*sweatdrop* actually, it's cookies pain passing through me, so you should really tell her that

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ViejoBabasama In reply to sasuchick33 [2008-08-29 02:11:26 +0000 UTC]

Send me a link to her so I can put her on 's list.
ILY

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sasuchick33 In reply to ViejoBabasama [2008-08-29 02:35:10 +0000 UTC]

go to my page and look through my comments. she's in there.......somewhere

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ViejoBabasama In reply to sasuchick33 [2008-09-01 21:34:33 +0000 UTC]

:damphry:

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sasuchick33 In reply to ViejoBabasama [2008-09-01 21:50:03 +0000 UTC]

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ViejoBabasama In reply to sasuchick33 [2008-09-28 01:20:33 +0000 UTC]

The song Eternity....oh Swan Princess.... I'm slow.
I couldn't figure out I started humming it everytime I looked at this poem.

ILY

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sasuchick33 In reply to ViejoBabasama [2008-09-28 03:42:35 +0000 UTC]

.......noooooooo comment mum. ni comment.

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