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Sasurealian — Reflection
Published: 2012-03-21 19:24:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 16408; Favourites: 1004; Downloads: 153
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Cold and smooth is the surface of glass, but it doesn't have a color,and it hides the naked truth unlike any other
You look so innocent in the truth, but it really, truly lies,
'cause the person that it sees right now hardly can comply
The glowing glass holds the image of you, but all it sees is perfection
you like to tease it is the truth, though it is only your reflection
Blinded by beauty is the mirror to only notice features
it compares you to the rest, lower than a creature
It can't see your pain inside, or understand your feelings
and you know as you move on, it's yourself you're slowly killing
You let out a cry of pain as you pound your fist into the glass
then you fall onto your knees and hope those feelings swiftly pass
The mirror breaks and is left confused as it lays there shattered
blood drips down your raw hand and your breathing slowly patterns
Now the mirror is just like you, it's broken and a mess
and you can't repair the pieces which are lower than they are less
Though as you stare into the shards the truth is what you see
pieces shattered of yourself, just ruined quality
The mirror was a sneaky tool to prevaricate the void
something that you can't escape and one you can't avoid
Swindler, spurious, and vague, it rests in stagnation
and as you slowly walk away you pretend it was your imagination
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Comments: 196
ur welcome ^_^ i showed it to my friend and she told me to tell u its great/amazing
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I love the meaning behind this! Its so... AmAzInG!!! Ur an Amazing wrighter!!!!!!!! <3 its so sad...
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Aww ;^; well, you're just so kind, so thank you. ^^ <3 *huggles*
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awww thankies!! your so king too!! *hugies back* <3 love ur work!!
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...I'm so jealous... T~T I wish I could write as good as you! I love it! It's great! You're flow is great, but rough in some places. Work on your grammar a bit, and your spelling is amazing! The idea behind the poem is beautiful and sadly true. Melancholy. I'm having trouble explaining it, but it's great. 
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Thanks~ I will work harder in the future.
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I really like this comparison. >u< This poem has an intense feeling of emotion.
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Oh thank you so so so much
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You're very very very welcome. ^^
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When I see this picture I think of the song Fine Again by Seether
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Ohh I wanna hear that song now!
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Love the idea ^^ And the picture is just splendid ^^
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Oh gosh thank you sooooo much ^^
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xD Yea it is....I need to replace that xD
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I have nothing to say... Do you want me to spam to you that you are an amazing writer and how I enjoy your work and how I'm speechless everytime, because of your genius, and how everytime you touch my little heart in any way you choose and cetera and cetera... Nahh, I won't spam you! It's to much reading... Laziness kills us all (-_-)zZZ
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xD You're too sweet, you know that? xD And adorable, too <33 ilyilyily <33 thank you for reading this. :3 You're such a sweetie <3~~~
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Aww you're the sweet one! Thank you for the nice words <333 Continue the fantastic writing of yours and we all will continue to spam you with love
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>.< I know, it shocked me!
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Be proud of it! :3 It's a good thing! It means people like it~ ^^
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Thank you 
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I've read many poems from the front page, but yours is unique. First I saw the preview photo that made me curious, but when I saw it was a poem I thought 'neeeee, I'm not going to read it'. Still, when I read the first few words I just couldn't leave this page!
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Oh wow really? That makes me feel so special 8D It is the outloook I was hoping to get. Gosh thank you so much!
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It was all your imagination..? D': That's cold!
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xD Yea, it does sound cold doesn't it? I guess it was a mind thing o.o
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