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Satosanteru β The Things That Make Us Strong part 4
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Published: 2014-01-10 08:46:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 58800; Favourites: 553; Downloads: 70
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neh neh, Sasuke-kun...Kakashi won't be very happy with you.Some things I have to say about this:
1. So much Kyuubi, he's time consuming!
2. I totally didn't include Sasuke's holster in any of the panels...let's pretend he dropped it along with his shirt.
3. Yes...the tears on Naruto's chest look like something else...perverts. They're having a moment ok?!
4. I don't think Sasuke is being OOC, he's cried before, it just takes a lot. Yes/no?
Let's up the number to 40 comments before I post the next page. Also, I'm going to New Zealand for a week on Sunday, so the next page won't be uploaded next week, but the week after sometime. If you see I've posted anything next week it's 'cause it's a delayed submission. Let me know what you think. How do you think Kakashi is going to react? And what's Sasuke gonna do next?
Love you! kissehs!
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Awhh you're so sweet! That's the best sort of compliment ^_^
I hadn't considered that Kakashi might be proud of Sasuke at all, but I like the idea. It's only 'cause they wouldn't really be abandoning Naruto, they'd come back for him with help. They're no good to Naruto dead anyways.
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OMG Poor Naruto! When he wakes up and see Sasuke he will be devastated.I think Kakashi will be very, very angry with Sasuke. And very worried too. Β This page is just wonderful. Love your doujin sooooo much
Good luck in New Zealand !Β
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Thank you so much! You're probably right about Kakashi...and about Naruto's reaction
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Ah, my little fluttering heart feels so nice when it's warmed by such a beautiful story ^^
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This story has just begun and it's so good! Keep it up!!!Β
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It has, I don't know how long I'll make it. And I will ^_^
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Soo amazing! I'm really curious to what happens next! I bet when Naruto get's controll over his body/Kyuubi's chakra again, he will be soooo sorry. Please don't let Sasuke die!
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You will definitely find that out soon. Thank you dear!!! xox
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Shhhh!! You'll disturb them!
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I'm quiet, don't worry
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! THE FFEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELS
Omg, I love how you draw SasukeΒ΄s faces and the emotion he express...
I really love this page and canΒ΄t wait to see more of it. Keep working hard and have fun in New Zealand.
A bug hug for youuuu
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A big hug back at you Thank you for your sincere words ^^
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Great job on the kyuubi! Woah sasuke sure is brave. Wouldnt it hurt to touch naruto in this state?Β Β
I like sasuke disobeying kakashi's orders in this scenario!
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Thank you!!! It probably would burn to a degree, but for the sake of the story, I'm assuming that it only burns Naruto, and only burns someone else when Naruto attacks someone else.
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This is so awesome. And so tragic. Love it.
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My pleasure, always.
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OMG! OMG!! OMG!!! OMG!!!!!!
1) Did Ssuke get hurt by Naruto trying to wipe his tears?
2) 4th panel - ABSOLUTELY ADORABLE!!! Β
3) Actually, now that I think about it, Naruto's/Kyubi's chakra is like a poison when you touch. It hurts Naruto's body in this form and it hurts others if they get into contact...so how come Sasuke's able to hug and sit on Naruto like that? 
4) Naruto is so cute in the last panel, removing his hand immediately. Awwwww, he looks scared...I wish I could hug him.. :'3
Now, for the make up part! *desperately waiting* Β
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment(s)!
1) Naruto touched Sasuke's wound out of curiosity, that's what did it.
2) ^_^
3) I thought about it. Sasuke is definitely not immune to Naruto's red chakra (as you'll see soon). But the way I see it, it's harmful only if Naruto actively uses it on someone. It's my creative license xD
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Awwwww, your'e welcome! Β
I could go on rambling on how much I adore your art, Β but you're also a busy person, right? So you'll just get tired of them, lol Β
Thank you so much for such an open and detailed answer. Β
Please, keep up an awesome art of yours, and THANK YOU for your hard work! Β
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I don't think I will get tired of well thought feedback. I wouldn't post my stuff in a public forum otherwise.
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I really like this! Nice doujinshi!!!
I'm looking foward for the next page!
Also the way you drew kyuubi looks great!
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Thank you Choko, that means a lot coming from you
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Goddamnit it just keeps getting better and betterΒ Β I'm totally in love! I feel like Kakashi is gonna be a mood killer and jump in the action. When I think of Sasuke's actions, I keep thinking back to that picture you drew of Sasuke and Naruto in this mode and justΒ Β
Whatever you make happen, I'll totally love it! Haha
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Well, I won't spoil anything, but Kakashi definitely won't be interrupting anything before the right time. But he might be a "little" upset with his young Uchiha. Angry Kakashi... Β
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I can see it now, "ARE YOU INSANE SASUKE, YOU COULD HAVE GOTTEN YOURSELF KILLED!" and all that jazzΒ Β
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Omg I love this so much! Especially the fifth and the tenth panels! They are so great, my heart skipped a beat when I saw Sasuke crying..
I bet Kyuubi is taking you time to draw him, but the result is wonderful! He's really well-drawn 
Have fun in New Zealand!
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Thank you! Great feedback ^^
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You're welcome and thanks I guess ; w ;Β
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I love the way you drew their positions, and also their hands. I love the way you drew everything. I have a question, though... is that Kyuubi acting on his own and trying to wipe away Sasuke's tears, or is Naruto suppressing Kyuubi enough to do that himself? Excuse me, I'm stupid, sorry xD
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Thank you so much! As for your question, you're not stupid, it's just not meant to be clear what exactly is happening to Naruto.
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Oh, okies :3 and thanks for answering my question xD
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I really like the way you colored Sasuke's hair ;o
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oh my gooooooood... feels! cant wait to see how the story might go on!!!
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Naruto touched Sasuke and it burned,that's something I've been planning to do with Hinata,that's so sad
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More like he touched Sasuke's wound, but burned works fine too. He probably would burn if he touched you...
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Oh...I didn't see the wound on his face,I thought it was blood from his mouth
But this still is really sad,even if it is a Sasunaru
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This is some intense stuff right here, and you draw Naruto in this form well.Β Good job!
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Thanks for that ^_^
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It's so cute that Sasuke gulps at Naruto and straddles across him XD
and Kyuubi pulls his ears back when sasuke's tears and blood drip onto his chest, so much feelsΒ Β
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