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Satosanteru β The Things That Make Us Strong part 4
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Published: 2014-01-10 08:46:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 58797; Favourites: 553; Downloads: 70
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neh neh, Sasuke-kun...Kakashi won't be very happy with you.Some things I have to say about this:
1. So much Kyuubi, he's time consuming!
2. I totally didn't include Sasuke's holster in any of the panels...let's pretend he dropped it along with his shirt.
3. Yes...the tears on Naruto's chest look like something else...perverts. They're having a moment ok?!
4. I don't think Sasuke is being OOC, he's cried before, it just takes a lot. Yes/no?
Let's up the number to 40 comments before I post the next page. Also, I'm going to New Zealand for a week on Sunday, so the next page won't be uploaded next week, but the week after sometime. If you see I've posted anything next week it's 'cause it's a delayed submission. Let me know what you think. How do you think Kakashi is going to react? And what's Sasuke gonna do next?
Love you! kissehs!
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that should be Hinata trying to hel Naruto's anger with her love, obiously without any injury and just talking gentle with him, correct???
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Shouldn't the Kyubis chakra had started poisoning his skin and blood? Nonetheless its wonderful to read a comic where Sasuke isnt a huge pokerfaced asshole or insane and tries to save his (boyfriend) teammate instead.
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Probably, although there's no evidence in the series that Kyuubi mode does anything to other people other than burn. The movie where Naruto was poisoned was an exception.
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I love the way you draw Naruto's Kyuubi form (or whatever it's called cause I can't remember)
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Duh I love this so much, you really have a way of making me want to hide under a blanket crying because of the feeeels ;o;Β
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this page...
the feels...
sasuke's tears...
i just cantΒ Β
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Awww it's so sweet Sasuuuuke! *random fangirling in the corner*
Thank you for the beautiful pages. The kyuubi is absolutely perfect!!
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how can there be this much drama on only page 4? XD lol
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Cause I'm an expert at it xD (in story telling)
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you most certainly are, and I love the emotions! (in their poses and expressions)
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Oh my god that fourth panel. Hnng. Hnnnnng. (I don't know how else to describe the yes that is that panel. Just saying.) Also, panels nine and ten are just so amazingly well detailed it's not even funny. You're way better at this than you seem to give yourself credit for. *nods in a sagely manner* The entire concept of this is so sad and heart wrenching. It really kills me to see Sasuke's reaction (which I agree is completely in character) and see that it's even getting to Naruto in this state. I think that would be perfectly valid even cannon, so, there's that. Also, Sasuke what the fuck how are you still standing with those gashes ._. Stop, you'll bleed out. ><
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I have a bit of a self destructive tendency towards my art, but I'm improving (both my art and my self critique.) I wrongly compare my work with other artists and tend to think I'm not as good as them. In a lot of cases, I'm not, but I know I'll get better and I am getting better. It has a lot to do with not having a style. I feel my stuff isn't recognizable, it's too inconsistent, but others would consider that a gift. I literally can draw Sasuke one way in one panel, and then he'll look totally different in the next. Takes a lot of effort to keep pages consistent.
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Uh excuse me? I see a thumbnail on my phone in my messages in one of the groups I'm in. It never says the artist name on a group submission and I INSTANTLY know you drew it. Not recognizable, shoot. *grumbles at you, levels a warning finger*
On that note, I do the same thing with my own work. Not sure why we feel so inclined to. undermine ourselves like that. But, improvement is always a nice fruit to bear. I think we need less self-deconstruction and more self-critique. u- u'
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u_u nuuhhh not the fingah! I am ashamed...!
I think every artist does it. I hate being that way though, which is why I draw a lot, so that one day I can just draw what I want automatically and not struggle at all and just know that yes, this is my style.
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Well good! 
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Have fun in NZ, I live there.Β Hope you get lots of inspiration on holiday.
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AWESOME CAN'T WAIT
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Oh my gosh, your doujinshi is the cutest thing ever <3
There's only 4 pages and I'm already in love with it
Your style is so nice and the way you draw Kyuubi is stunning
Keep up the awesome work ^^
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Thank you so much! Lovely words, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
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NEXTONENEXTONENEXTONENEXTONENEXTONENEXTONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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1. You paint Kyuubi really well X3
2. I didn't notice because I was busy thinking of the awesome story I was reading XD
3. I didn't even imagine that the tears could be something else until I read the description X'D
4. Of course not X3 Sasuke is cold, but not incapable of crying. Poor Sasu-chan TwT
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Thank you for that!!! You're very sweet. Also, I've been meaning to mention how cute your avatar is *pinches Sasuke's cheek*
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No problem X3 Aw, thanks! >3< Yeah, he is so cute ^w^
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3fehndiuerjdeiwndcuredncuoer THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!Β
Cannot wait to see more of your lovely lovely work!Β
I love this comic and the way you are designing it. Sasuke not giving up on Naruto? Now that is a changeΒ Β
but I love how Naruto is trying his best to reach out to Sasuke- even in this horrible state of his D: I hope he pulls through!
but some things I love about this comic so far are the expressions and the way you draw their faces. All of the faces so far have looked wonderful and the emotions clearly show on the faces!!Β
wonderful job so far! keep up the great work!
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ASDFASDFASDFASDF Thank you for reading and liking it so much!!! I hope you enjoy the rest ^_^
Sasuke not giving up on Naruto is a change for him the way he is now in the manga, but not when they were kids. He was very different back then, and he really pushed Naruto (on purpose) to better himself. And when he took Haku's attack, he definitely wasn't giving up on Naruto. But even at thies point in the manga, Sasuke still shows signs that he won't let Naruto give up, like when he tells him "is that all you got, I'm just getting started." etc etc.
And I'm very happy with what you say about the faces, I focus a lot on them because I believe that expressions are the key to telling a visual story like this. Cause you can't write what they're literally feeling.
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You're so welcome!!! I cannot wait to see more of this amazing piece!!! <333Β
Very good points to that- you are correct that Sasuke did his best to keep Naruto at his best since he didn't want a rival that was so weak and to help push him towards his own goals! ~
I like the Sasuke now in the manga but I still can't believe the turn out for chapter 661- both naruto and sasuke??? That was a bit killer on the feels. However, we all know Kishimoto has things up his sleeves >w<
Keep up the great work so far!! Cannot wait to see the rest!!! <3
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As I thought, Sasuke's not listening to sensei. Too big is his urge not to abandon Naruto in his misery. It's as if their fates were changed. In canon it's Sasuke who loses his track in case to get more power, here it would be Naruto. If they'd retreat, Naruto would become a mere menace to Konoha as Sasuke did. Naruto'd become hunted down as alike Sasuke who became a nuke nin in canon.
But seriously, what was Sasuke's intention by this attack? Pinning the Kyuubi down and then? 
I think he had the intention to kill Naruto swiftly maybe with his kunai, but then couldn't bring himself to do it. Therefore he started crying automatically, against his own will. His feelings just flew over and so did his eyes.
Sasuke's crying blood an tears, which is an overwhelming, emotional moment, irresistible even to the Kyuubi or better said the tiny, sparkling part of that entity which is still Naruto. That careful, gentle approach Naruto/Kyuubi's making is so hearttaking. Unfortunately his evil chakra brushes Sasuke's wound. His cry of pain makes the creature whine as if it felt even more pain than its victim. It's the moment of sudden awreness. I think Naruto will take over now and finally force himself back to his true form. But he'll be in an even worse condition than Sauke after that, as we already know from canon.
What will happen next? I don't know. Maybe Kakashi will interfere, maybe not, who knows? He'll be pissed like hell after that but first he'll take care of that situation. That's for sure as a pro as he is.
Kyuubi's drawing may be time consuming, but it's absolutely worth it! I love it how you softened the whiteness around the edges, so that it looks like Naruto's inner parts were turned to pure energy. I really admire your patience to hatch the Kyuubi's body all along. That must be the most time taking part, I guess.
What do you think Naruto's tears look like? I'm no pervert, so please YOU tell me! (embarrassing-question-alert!)
Naaah, I'm just joking, I know you mean they look like wedding rings. But wait, how should that be pervert?
XD XD XD
I'm sorry, I'm commenting that late but my moving is eating me up quite now. Nevertheless this is one of my most favourite doujinshis and I hope you're going on soon!
So this comment should count as ten, yes?
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Well, after all you wrote I think this deserves to count as ten comments *_____* You're so sweet for taking the time to write a huge paragraph like that. I'm very touched, thank you!!!
Well, if they retreated, they wouldn't abandon Naruto. Kakashi would bring the rest of his team to safety and advise the Hokage and lead a team of very strong Jonin with sealing abilities. And they would have to be quick before Naru grows more tails. But it won't come to that
Sasuke's intention? I don't know if he even had one. Even as the artist I sometimes don't know what the characters are really thinking. And it's great when my readers interpret what they like, it gives the story more dimension and possibilities. Sasuke went with his feeling, he knows somehow he can stop Naruto...it'll be explained later ^^
Once Naruto is back to normal, both boys will be in quite a state, as we know from canon.
Kyuubi is time consuming but I not as much as you think. I apply a texture to get that cross-hatching effect in photoshop, then I shade it with black cross-hatching and add light effects with a pale red etc etc.
See you on the next page!
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Thank you you're so nice! And you're very welcome!
Thank you for all the explanations!
So you used an effect in Photoshop, that's great. I already thought doing all this hatching was almost impossible.
Can't wait for it! Β
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If this only happened in the manga, its so sweet!
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Alas...the editors would never let boyxboy content on the pages. That's why people like me do this xD
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Ohh my. This is getting pretty awesome. And I don't think its OOC for sasuke to cry at all, i mean remember when sakura got hit by the kyuubi? The little scratch like burns you're freaking skin off. Thats gotta hurt. That, and sasuke is having a moment. He's allowed to have a little emotion sometimes, right? Totally justified. Seriously though this is amazing. Arigato for making this!
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I never thought that Sasuke might be crying out of pain. But it's not wrong, that wound is extremely painful, and Sasuke's not safe yet 
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Thank you for making this!!! Cant wait to see how it ends.
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Poor Kakashi... Not really.
DO YOUR THING SASUKE! And cry as much as you want, it s IC.
About the secound point... do they? If they are no tears, they are rain... both isnt pervert anyways.
Kyuubi is so cute! Such damn cute content!! Β°U//w//UΒ°
I think sasuke is going to hug the kyuubi... would that be nonsence?
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No, Sasuke hugging Kyuubi wouldn't be nonsense...you'll see ^_^
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