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Satosanteru β The Things That Make Us Strong part 5
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Published: 2014-01-25 12:23:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 71473; Favourites: 622; Downloads: 16
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It is done!!! And I bet you're all happy to see it cause I took long enough. I was distracted...but all good things in life are worth waiting for, or something. And if you hadn't had enough feels from the last chapter, I present you more. This is what you've all been wanting/waiting for.And after this page, no more Kyuubi!!!
YAY for me, cause he's time-consuming
POO for you, cause I know you guys like him. You'd like him less if he gave you a huge gash on your chest.
And Kakashi isn't pleased. Well, he's pleased that they're all still alive. Not pleased with Sasuke's behavior. They're gonna have "the talk."
Edit: Thank you SOOO much for all your comments and support. I don't think I've properly thanked you all, because I really appreciate it. If I don't respond to your comment it's because I can't think of anything exceptional to say, other than THANK YOU ASDF!!! So yes, thank you all
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did Sasuke just kiss Naruto to change him back?!
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True love's kiss will break the spell!!!
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thats a bit Cleche but ok
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Sure...except the hero is kissing a fiery demon and he isnt really the hero he's the anti-hero and they're 13 and they're gay ninjas XD
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and in the shinnobi world, homosexuality does exist, just not much, the accidental kiss Sasuke and Naruto had at the start of the anime, aaaaaand now this on perpous but also Cliche kiss in the comic Β XD
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*cliche
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I just realized Sasuke gave him the kiss of life I'm-
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Better than Disney
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Lol they'll have that talk too. But not in this doujin xD
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This is my all time favourite part and I am in love with itβ€οΈ
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Kakashi staying cool-headed in the midst of all that, amazing sensei is amazing
And then Sasuke just begging Naruto to fight back, to not let it control him. He cares so much, and that kiss, full of feelings and determination, I just...
I absolutely love the panels where Naruto turns back, you can feel the burn and the pain, it's really like an open wound
Sasuke in the last panel, I love his expression, he doesn't regret what he's done but he doesn't like to be scold like some immature child and it shows really well
You're a great artist, love you~Β
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this is so beautiful.... *right in the heart*
Sasuke it's good now, no need to worry anymore, naruto has returned thank to your love snifff (T.T)b
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lol, Sas is gonna be doing pleeeenty of worrying
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And I look forward to see it nyahahahahaha >.<
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That's right! Kakashi's putting his foot down! xP
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aaaw the last panel I love Sasuke's face
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Yay, thank you! >//<
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You're welcomeΒ
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Awwwwww, the way Kyu's ears are down like that in regret! It's just so augh. >< I feel bad for him! If he wasn't such an asshole it wouldn't have been a problem! Bad Kyuubi! Nyaww, Sasuke. ;-; Stoppiiiit, I don't even like you stop making me have feeeels. >< God I love so much about this page. Kakahsi's inner dialect is a really nice touch to see I think, since you don't get to see into characters' heads very often. And although he's right to think so, I don't know that I would have brought up reprimand in this situation if I was him. I like the guilt and hurt in Sasuke's expression in the last panel. Very true to character and as always a lovely expression in general.
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I just realized that You've left a lot of comments on my stuff. Wow, thank you! I'm working my way backwards!
What really impresses me is that you play Sasuke so damn well, but you don't like him. If I don't like a character I'm not sure I'd be able to portray them successfully. I just hope you enjoy playing him, but you said you do. And I hope that you grow to like him more. A lot happens in the manga, you'll see when you get there. Is it that you like his character but don't like what he does, or do you just straight up not like him? I wish you liked him!!! TT^TT
I tossed up whether to include Kakashi's internal dialect about scolding Sasuke, cause I agree with you; it's a little out of place. I included it partly to foreshadow what was to come, but also because in that moment Kakashi's actually really pissed. His kids are safe (or so it seems) and the anger just washes over him because he's lost so many people already.
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But of course!! I would have replied sooner but I was on my phone and didn't want to fight with it. xD
I think one of the reasons I play him so well, as you put it (
I can completely understand that. I think it was the perfect touch, especially because it also lets the reader step back and asses the situation as well.
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There is more! There's a part 6, and I'm working on part 7
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You'll find out really soon.
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but soon is too long 
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Well the next page was just posted...enjoy
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yay im going to read it naw
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Awesome page! X3 I love the last two panels!
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This is really great! I love the coloring and the art!
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Oh,I'm so awfully sorry for my delayed comment! But at the moment I don't know where to take the time from. And since I knew this would take quite some time, I left it out till now.
Your artwork is amazing and the story is heartshaking! I don't get tired to tell you how close your characters are to the original... no that isn't true, they're even better.
Though the Kyuubi's face has almost no details to work with, like the iris of the eyes and such, you managed to express his fellings so well by his body language, it amazes me! His sadness, remorse and longing are so visible, that it's extremely touching!
Sasuke's caressing hand on the Kyuubi's face appears as pain-allaying as an ointment on an open wound.
The despair in Sasuke's eyes out of the fear to lose his friend, you got it so well in the third panel, that I'm moved to tears myself.
His words are so touching as well... Sasuke realizes he's on the wrong way, yet he can't turn, but with the rest of his remaining light he wants at least save his friend from this darkness and emptiness.
The next two panels show that love is stronger than death, stronger than anything even fear and hatred. Sasuke sure has guts to kiss such a devastating creature, but he's not thinking in this moment, his feelings rule his body completely. What a rare sight! Wish that could happen in canon!
That change of Kyuubi's expression in body language is amazing! From whining sadness to tense shock. His ears as well as his hair become erect from Sasuke's surprise-kiss. Though this may sound a bit pervy, it's meant in a natural biological way referring to the body language of animals. Erm, maybe it has a double meaning, I don't know, but you certainly do.
Whatever, you did it very well! Though Naruto's change back isn't surprising, it's very dramatical put in scene. We all can feel his pain and torture as if we were morphing ourselves.
Poor Naruto! And poor Sasuke, still shaking from the event and sudden awareness of his severe wounds and loss of blood.
As soon as it's safe, Kakashi rushes in to make sure they'll survive it. He's a cool calculating, experienced warrrior, after all. He knows, overcoming the change doesn't grant the two boys their lives, they still can die due to their wounds or shock.
Kakashi's staying calm, but nevertheless has the duty to make sure Sasuke won't disobey orders in the future, no matter what happens. He's appearing strict, but he does it because he really cares about his students.
The face of Sasuke in the last but one panel, he's like: NO WAY! And in the last panel he's probably wondering whether Kakashi wants to lecture him about his disobediance or his feelings for Naruto. Pervy old man!
Ah, it was such a great joy to read this page and I did it over and over again, because it's so touching. I'm just in love with this! So sorry for the delay! Hope you'll come to create the next page soon.
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Don't apologize for anything, especially followed by such a massive and wonderful review. I never expect feedback from anyone, nor do I demand it. But it's always nice to get, so I hope you never feel obliged to comment.
Being told my rendition of the characters are better than the original is a huge ego stroke, like...be careful my head might inflate too much 
As for Kyuubi, the ear thing was just a body language detail, like a dog pricking its ears at something enticing. I don't even know...does Kyuubi have genitals...? Like they're one of a kind beasts, why would they need them LOL!
Anyways, so glad you're enjoying it, and thank you so much!! The next page is in development, just for you
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Don't worry, I always like to comment on excellent artwork like yours!
I'd never endanger your head! Does that mean I have to hold back my praises in the future?
Everything you said is so true, Sasuke acted like a spoiled child in canon. He should have needed more advice.
Even if Kyuubi doesn't have genitals, I'm sure Naruto has some.
Oh, my! I don't know what to say, I feel so flattered! And I'm also excited about the new page already!
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Nuuhh, no praise withholding...I like it too much ^^
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I love this manga! I can't wait for more!
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I'm so mad I just found this but so happy at the same time >.< I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
btw you are amazing.
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Don't be mad, be glad! Thank you Β
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