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The Braixen was moved into a dark room, which seemed to be absent of any form of light as if it wasn'tused often, the assistants moved the blueberry fox onto a peculiar spot on the floor and walked away.
She didn't know what was going to happen to her as many thoughts rushed her head,
'What are they going to do to me?
Am I going to stay like this forever?
And if so, how much bigger am I going to get?
But- What if I don't stop getting bigger?'
She stopped herself immediately, she couldn't cope with that very thought, Braixen already had enough to worry about.
Her pondering quickly stopped when a sudden flash emitted in front of her; the room started to beam as many televisions, buttons and other miscellaneous contraptions whizzed and hummed to life, revealing a maroon coloured room.
Despite all of that lighting however, the fox felt like she was sitting in absence of light.
A voice came from in front of her.
"SCAN COMPLETE."
Braixen wanted to run, she desperately wanted to, the room lit up like a Christmas tree and she didn't want anything to do with
what they had in store.
She couldn't.
She was weighed down by what felt like gallons upon gallons of blueberry juice sloshing and heaving around inside her, trying to make room by filling up
and pushing outwards.
She wasn't going anywhere, as much as she tried; her legs have already sucked into the large mass that used to be her stomach as well as her arms,
the tail had almost reached the same size as her body and anchored Braixen slightly backwards.
Her size matched a large family car and still she kept swelling, feeling every bit of her stretching, feeling every single bubble swirling around.
Braixen noticed two men that were behind a few monitors, talking to one another.
It was incredibly difficult to make out any kind of features due to the immense light coming from everything where Braixen was looking.
"So, what do you think? Can we change it back?" the one on the left asked the other.
"I'm not sure, do you see how big it's getting?" the other responded.
"It might be too late, the rate of expansion is steadily increasing by the minute."
Braixen's eyes widen and she was about to gasp, but then she felt something warm in her mouth, it tasted of... Blueberry.
She wanted to scream, but she couldn't, her lips refused to move as if a unknown force held them.
Her cheeks were puffing out slowly but surely.
Braixen her something, only managing to make out voices over the gurgling noises.
It seemed like another person joined the conversation.
"So, how's it doing?"
"Not so well, it's estimated that it could grow up to almost over twice its own size before..."
"A janitors worst nightmare."
*Slap* "OW!"
"I'm not paying you to crack harsh reality jokes, I want 654 back to the way it was; on the double!"
"But sir! We've never done it before, remember-"
"I know! Don't remind me. Ugh..."
There was footsteps.
"If that PokΓ©mon doesn't pull through... Well, you know what happens."
"Y-yes sir!"
Long description is long. Β
And so this sequence is over.
Also, I've noticed my progression over the three drawings weren't 'smooth', but now I know to plan theses better in the future.
Self improving a go-go!
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Comments: 46
piggyrblx2 In reply to RosetheRiolu [2023-12-28 17:59:32 +0000 UTC]
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OhYeahFarfoxx [2017-07-05 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]
(A mysterious blue rectangle carrying something came in)
(But it was holding.... a rocket)
Scientist: What the fu-
(Three hours of murdering later)
(Stops the blueberry juice)
(Gives antidote)
(Leaves)
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SatsumaTheBlue In reply to OhYeahFarfoxx [2017-07-05 20:05:39 +0000 UTC]
I would appreciate it if you don't spam comments on my drawings please.
I understand you want to be very vocal and all that, but I'm sure you keep it all in one comment.
Thank you very much.
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OhYeahFarfoxx In reply to SatsumaTheBlue [2017-07-06 16:21:51 +0000 UTC]
I am sorry. Forget the comments. I just went through a meltdown of rage.
Sorry...
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Thatbrasschronodent In reply to OhYeahFarfoxx [2017-07-05 20:02:57 +0000 UTC]
Can you stop killing the scientists please? They're hard to replace
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SgtWarzone0526 In reply to Thatbrasschronodent [2022-03-21 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]
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OhYeahFarfoxx In reply to Thatbrasschronodent [2017-07-06 16:23:09 +0000 UTC]
Kyle: Nah, I will injure them instead.
Besides, this isn't how you solve world hunger or whatever they are trying to solve.
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Thatbrasschronodent In reply to OhYeahFarfoxx [2017-07-06 16:51:14 +0000 UTC]
Injured scientists won't do either, look rectangle or not, you can't just break into a SECRET government facility, it breaks immersion not to mention its messing with the plot of this narrative entirely, think of it this way, Imagine if you built a house of cards and I came out of nowhere to knock it down, you'd be annoyed to say the least because you took time to carefully craft that, do you not feel you might be doing the same here?
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HeroFoxyNighthowler [2017-01-13 02:07:23 +0000 UTC]
i might be able to make a cure but it'll take a few hours
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 17:52:01 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 18:42:43 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 18:51:46 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 18:58:44 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 19:00:17 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 19:01:39 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 19:02:41 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 19:05:59 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 19:08:12 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 19:10:21 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 19:11:21 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 19:12:29 +0000 UTC]
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piggyrblx2 In reply to alinh1296 [2023-12-28 19:18:08 +0000 UTC]
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alinh1296 In reply to piggyrblx2 [2023-12-28 19:18:40 +0000 UTC]
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Mario11704 [2016-05-06 22:11:12 +0000 UTC]
THEN NESS AND LUCAS STORM THE PLACE AND BEAT THE SHIT OUT OF THE SCIENTISTS!
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midna5443 [2016-03-02 05:47:09 +0000 UTC]
poor braixen i dont her to pop or anyone touch or hurt her
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SatsumaTheBlue In reply to Darkstar1346 [2016-02-01 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]
Does it?
*Looks at the later drawings*
Yeah, I guess so.
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Darkstar1346 In reply to SatsumaTheBlue [2016-02-01 22:31:55 +0000 UTC]
Its kinda like that one scene from catcf
...BUT...WAY...DARKER... Β
like final destination...dark...
(ok im gonna shut up now...)
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Horizon-004 [2015-10-31 04:25:07 +0000 UTC]
*A Destiny Titan approaches the facility, enters, and takes out a few guards, then comes across the room with the Braixen*
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Horizon-004 In reply to Horizon-004 [2015-10-31 05:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Titan: "Wait... So, I invaded a facility... to see this, Variks?"
Variks: "Yes."
Titan: "This is weird. Seeing a... blueberry-ish like creature. Quite big."
Variks: "That is why you are here, yes? You came to collect salary, so here it is."
Titan: "Really? So, what do I do? Stab a knife into it and kill it?"
Variks: "Collect sample of juice, yes?"
Titan: "So, kill it?"
Variks: "No."
Ghost: "I can transmat it out for you."
Titan: "Give me a sample, then."
*Ghost transmats a sample of this "juice" inside of the Braixen*
Titan: "I got what I came for, now where's my Zhalo Supercell, Variks?!"
Variks: "... Come to Reef."
Titan: "Fine. See ya there, Ghost."
*The Titan transmats out of there, and goes to Variks in the Reef*
Titan: "Alright, here's a sample, in a pill."
Variks: "Thank you."
Titan: "So, what is it supposed to do?"
Petra Venj: "It's supposed to, well, make you a blueberry. Like Wonka gum?"
Titan: "Oh. I'm not trying it."
Variks: "You're not. Give this to an enemy, and observe its effects."
Titan: "Alright."
*The Titan goes to Earth and fills a magazine with only these pills*
Titan: "Here goes nothing!"
Dreg: UWBGIRNVB *The Dreg became a blueberry and exploded with the juice, dying instantly(
Titan: "Weird, but cool."
*The Titan was given the Zhalo Supercell for his efforts*
Titan: "Alright, thank you. What now?"
Variks: "... Go to Prison of Elders... Find... Kill. Return to me after you have found an Elder Cipher. It's blue, by the way."
Titan: "Got it!"
*The Titan flew away to find a fireteam, and to do a couple waves of Prison of Elders until he found an "Elder Cipher"*
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Horizon-004 In reply to Horizon-004 [2015-10-31 06:02:52 +0000 UTC]
*The Titan got thousands of Elder Ciphers, which were green. Then, there it was. The Blue one.*
Titan: "... Seems something of significance. I'll let Variks look at it."
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CreepyDarkrai [2015-06-05 07:45:30 +0000 UTC]
if this happened to me....the scientists and guards would have killed me,..
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marfmarf02 [2015-03-10 05:20:10 +0000 UTC]
Fusion: *Sees this and his jaw hits the floor.* this is worse than what they did to me!
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MJMSTUDIOS2020 [2014-11-28 06:58:29 +0000 UTC]
I like your description so far. When I was making my recent story, it toke me 2 weeks to finish having to be at exactly 46 pages long. Imagine me writing it with my hand and it won't be able to finish by then.
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Zeronames [2014-03-27 21:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Would it be too late to take her to a county fair now?? That Braxien looks mighty full there.
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SatsumaTheBlue In reply to Zeronames [2014-03-28 09:58:48 +0000 UTC]
I'd say give her a little more time to reach peak capacity,
she'll win the fair in a heartbeat.
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Tails230 [2014-03-27 03:21:34 +0000 UTC]
hhehehehe. Awww what a cute braixen! X3 I loved this sequence
Its sad the its over now. X3
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