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Published: 2017-04-20 05:01:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 10219; Favourites: 252; Downloads: 24
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Watching your fake ocs actually helps me make better ones because it like shows me whats a bad idea, so I don't accidentally do it again. It's weird. The good one actually helped me make my BATIM oc. I know the answer is probably no, if there is even an answer, but... want to hear about her?
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mary sue wendy needs help cuz CupheadXbendy FOR LIFE
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to be honest, the "fixed" version seems like the blandest, uninteresting character, ever.
her like-options seem like they have no relevance whatsoever, just as her dislike options.
and the bio... holy shit, that REALLY emphasizes on how uninteresting she is! no relevance, no significance whatsoever.
you just "numbed" her down and claim you "fixed" it.
you created a "bad character" on purpose, while not even properly elaborating why this character is bad or how they would play out in a story. so of course the "fixed" version would also turn out to be just as bland and uninteresting.
atleast the story of the "non-fixed" version provides some potential. like what if she starts to question why she loves bendy or if alice tries to "take bendy back"? but the fixed version is just "side character, nuff said." yeah, that really shows that you have no clue of making a character interesting.
and did you just make 3 like- and 3 dislike-options, just for the quota?
in case you still don't know this: if the like-, dislike-options don't affect the character and how they act in the story, they are useless.
in short: creating good and interesting characters is not a one way street. you can make OP characters interesting, you can make OCxCanon characters interesting, you just need to know how.
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like you can makeΒ a better good oc tutorial
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i actually can.
and i just need a few sentences:
-do whatever you want, but then think about how to make it interesting.
-think about what goals, the lack of goals of the Character has and then think about how it influences the story. what kind of role a character serves for a story and how it plays out, thanks to them.
-and best tip, try to make them believable within the story, so that it creates suspension of disbelief.
- and most importantly: ditch the idea that certain traits are inherently Mary-Sue traits. Mary-Sues are defined by bad characterization, misplaced role in the story and for bending the plot to their advantage, even without extra-ordinary powers within the story.
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Hecc. you should probably critique the latest artwork. Sav is trying to improve and your opinion on the latest works would be really helpful. :>
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It's just a joke character. Calm pls
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then this "joke" doesn't really make any sense.
because how does it work if you make a bad OC on purpose, but then put a fixed version next to it? if you can't make it clear what the punchline of the joke is, you failed at making it funny. because then, you just made it confusing.
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theres a video. fam. watch. it. ples
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so, in order for the joke to make sense, i need to watch a video, which isn't linked here?
i criticized the picture, not the video. (i watched the video, i didn't like it.)
and the video still doesn't make it any funnier as a joke. if anything, it just drags the joke.
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the point is it to be bad??? Im sorry if im coming off rude but the whole thing is a joke..;;
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1. i get it, it's a joke! doesn't make it exempt from criticism, though. you can criticize bad jokes.
2. it's not funny, because it doesn't make any sense!
i mean, wouldn't it make more sense to just show the "non-fixed", if the point of the joke-OC is it to be bad? why is a "fixed" version here in the first place, then?
i just don't get why it's supposed to be funny.
because, like i said, this joke makes no sense.
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Omg, i totally ship Bendy x Wendy. My new otp!
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I'm begging you to do a camp camp one-Β
I need it in my life
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t h a n k,,, it's neededddd
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Β I wanted to ask: you make bases by yourself, or you searching them? I want to use base
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she makes them herself
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Somebody stole this art and re-coloured it.Β theangelwholovesyou.deviantartβ¦
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Someone stole your art and recolored it!Β
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go fuck yourself furry cunt
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but you stole her art man, that ain't cool. ):T
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Theangelwholovesyou Whoa! Look, we are just telling the Artist because they deserve to know.
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you thiefΒ
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STFU THIEFΒ
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Hey, remember your warriors oc, can I have its babies? π
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Holy shit wendies is my favorite restaurant
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I saw your video and you inspire me to make a BATIM OC!Β
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"after alice was forgotten"? I remember it was "after alice was destroyed". XD
yep, I watched the vid. I have that tmnt song from it still stuck in my head. btw, could i get a link to the song used while making the fixed wendy? I couldnt find it. (GRAN- GRAND DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD! GRAN, GRAND DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAD)
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I watch your TY channel so thats how I found you ππ€π
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Hey can you see my oc and review it tell me what's good or bad plz
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Do a Totally Legit Death Tube OC (And pair her with Ponkichi)!
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Hey, after looking at this and watching the video where you create it, I have a few thoughts.
Β I understand that in most fandoms it is considered wrong and a sign of bad writing to make a clone OC. I get annoyed when I see OCs like this myself. However, in the BATIM fandom, I feel an exception can be made. An OC is usually supposed to stay true to the time period in which the story takes place, correct? Well, BATIM is based upon the 1930s cartoon era, and the first Mickey Mouse cartoon came out in 1928. I bring this up because cartoons at the time did often include a female clone of a main male character, examples being Minnie Mouse, Daisy Duck, Penelope Pussycat, Petunia Pig and many more. These female clones were used (for the most part) as a love interests to the male main.
So what am I trying to say? It would not be historically inaccurate to create a character who was a clone of, and the love interest to Bendy. I don't really like it, but it's a thing that very well could have happened at that time, and keeps OCs like this from being mary-sues.
Also! A 'sexy' character would be acceptable as well. There were cartoons like Betty Boop that showcased an attractive female character in skimpier clothing, so as long as the OC stuck to the style of the era, you really can't complain. The argument being, it would be historically accurate.
Obviously, this does not excuse bad writing, but it does give creators a valid reason for creating an OC like this.
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That's exactly what I was thinking when I saw this video.Β
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SAVVYSUE WHAT HAVE YOU CREATED ON THE LEFT?! ITS A LITERAL CLONE OF BENDY!
Also,Sav, great job at being creative and showing the dos and don'ts of how to make a creative OC like the one on the right
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I love the Wendy to the right. The style is unique. The hair is different, her outfit fits the time she's being made in and she ISN'T A MARYSUE. You always find ways to make a Marysue an awesome OC. I hope everything gets better for you. I'm watching the stream and I really want everything to be okay. Mad respect for you, fam.
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(its supposed to be a joke,im sorry if you meant your comment as a joke too)
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