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Sayuki-Art โ Donuts (Tutorial link in the description)
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Published: 2014-08-30 14:52:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 1631; Favourites: 156; Downloads: 12
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Watch the speedpaint here and the hair tutorial I did on this one here (:I'm back from holidays! This new semester will be the busiest of all so I think I'll don't have much time to draw *sob*
Anyway I hope you like her (:
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The first thing I noticed is the cool background in contrast with her warm skin color and the warm colors of the doughnuts. Because of that they pop out right away.
You have given shadow a lot of attention too. Especially on her face, the folds of her dress and on the doughnuts. And not to forget the shadow of the table which casts a shadow in a quite unique way. However, there are some shadows that seem to be missing, the shadow on the coffee cup, the phone and her arms casting a shadow on the table. Adding those shadows would in my opinion make the drawing more realistic (as far as that should apply in anime)v
It took me a while to notice that she was eating outside, that mainly because I thought that the glass behind her was a wall. Some glass effect which would cover part of the doughnuts on display and part of the background which I perceived as a wall would make the situation in the drawing a lot clearer. (Whether that is something you want is a different story, maybe you went for the effect that you really have to explore the picture to see what is going on).
Beside the minor details I mentioned above, there is one thing in particular which makes the image kind of strange. But then again, that is the most difficult thing to get right in an image. It's the perspective and the foreshortening that seems off for the following reasons:
Perspective point 1:
The char and the display window seem to go to one vanishing point. The table however is an ellipse which is almost perfectly symmetrical, which in the perspective of the background would not be the case. But then again it again it could be my eyes playing tricks on me. To be certain, you'd have to draw the square around the table from the vanishing point and see if the circle touches the corners of the square enough.
Perspective/Shadow point 2:
The second thing I noticed is that I can't really tell whether I'm looking at the top of the awning or underneath it. When I check with the horizon, it should be underneath, but I still get the feeling I'm watching the top. Changed shadows and maybe a curved in where the gravity makes the cloth of the awning fall down a little might help improve to see which side I'm looking at.
Foreshortening point 1:
The girls butt is quite noticeable and I wonder if that was the intended effect. I think it is larger then average compared to the shoulder width, but then again, not unrealistic.
Foreshortening point 2:
The arm holding the doughnut seems bigger then the arm with the empty hand. I believe that should be the other way around.
Overall I think your technique could use some work and mainly on shadows, foreshortening and perspective. The use of color and contrast, the amount of details, composition, expression and proportions are quite good.
What I liked best is the originality of a beautiful girl eating a doughnut in a normal manner instead of eating it gross or just stuffing it inside like you see in a lot of anime. Basically, the absence of a joke, but just eating doughnuts and looking at you. If I were single Iยดd offer her another doughnut (which might have happened twice already by the looks of the table e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sโฆ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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The detail on the character and the food is pretty good. the anatomy is pretty good as well. The look on her face I actually like a lot. my main problem with the piece is whats around her. it feels really flat and, sorry to say this, bland, like it could use more detail, cause it feels like there is a wall behind the donuts instead of an actual store, which is what I'm guessing you were trying to go to. also, the bars on the chair could look a bit better, like they are actually connected, instead of 2 stuff connected. However i do enjoy the piece
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Your coloring style is gorgeous! The colors are so nice and cool; it makes me feel cooler on this really hot day. xD (I live in SoCal, so it's super hot agh)
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The coloring is good.. ;3
but i think her neck is to long.
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Woah! It's pretty cute! Love How your bright colouring here
Amazing job~ <3
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Awww, don't be shy c:
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