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ScarletDevil1503 — Survive
Published: 2012-07-08 16:01:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 3499; Favourites: 140; Downloads: 18
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Whispers in my earCompel me to surrender.
But I will not hear;
I defy my contender.
Defeat is not an option;
There is no other way:
Survive against all odds
To die another day.
'Tis the oldest battlecry;
The only ultimatum.
Fight until you die—
Rather plain verbatim.
To be classified as "alive,"
Survive, survive, survive.
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Thank you! That means a lot to me.
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Ooh. I like it. It has this . . . I can't even explain it. Forceful encouraging feel to it? I don't know. It's good though. It's sometimes what people need just to get through, to know that all they have to do is survive.
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"Forceful encouragement" -- that's exactly what I wished to capture. 
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Great! You are very welcome, Miss.
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Time to duck out again. YOu have the same patterrn. Everything was positve,loving, talking about being together.
Now, I am your enemy, adversay. Sorry. Cant take it. Go find someone else to figh. Leave me out of your life
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Sorry, I think you're confusing me with someone else. I don't know you, and I've never shown any hostility toward you whatsoever. Please leave me alone.
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I love it,that message is something I'm always keeping at the back of my mind when i'm not a good place.
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Thank you. I definitely keep this in mind too.
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Yes I have to go through alot hard stuff. Reason why is I'm bi-polar.
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Thanks, I appreciate it! On an unrelated note, I really love your tagline. 
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XDDD lol gratzi ~ :'DD
And your welcome! ^ ^
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this is so amazing to read; i wish i'd had it when i was going through my rough time. 
bravo!
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Thank you for such a wonderful comment!
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you are most welcome.
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This is a very true poem, and I can relate to it perfectly. I love the forwardness of it, and the way it flows wonderfully.
Good job.
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I'm glad you can relate. Thank you!
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This is really nice
I also really like the style of this, you did a great job with it
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That's great to hear! Thank you very much.
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You're welcome! And thank YOU for posting this
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I definitely enjoyed it - it actually reminds me of a passage in the Bible. I can't remember what it is right now, though.
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Thank you. I know of several inspirational Scripture verses along this theme.
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Oh yeah, there are lots - I was just thinking about one in particular. I can't even remember which book it was in though...
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no prob, just survive!
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Wow, this poem sounds almost excactly like my OC!
Very nice poem. I think someone I know needs to read this
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