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wanna get out here, just climbing... and climbing....and now it seems to be done....
ich muss hier raus, klettere und klettere.... und dann hab ichs scheinbar geschafft...
Acryl auf Plastik, 50x80 cm
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sesam-is-open In reply to scheinbar [2024-01-14 14:00:48 +0000 UTC]
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ShadyBlues [2010-01-02 07:19:24 +0000 UTC]
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Impact
Brilliant concept for sure. When I first saw the tubs or whatever they are I looked, and looked to puzzle out which way they were supposed to viewed, but hey its art after all.
The shading definitely adds depth to the piece, but I think that the person himself should be larger, not by a huge amount though, just enough to add more presence. Since you've concentrated the highlights there and centered in on the negative space, I assume all the focus goes on the person. I feel that it needs to be assessed a little with an actual human figure, I understand this is abstract, but imho it could have more of an effect if the person was slightly more believable.
This may not be the best suggestion in many peoples opinions, but the result of doing it this way would please even those who at first would be against it. I think the figure after being corrected structurally a bit, and resized a bit, should have some kind of value, not necissarily with complete light or darks though, more of a matte gray sort of shading.
And overall I think if the brushstrokes had been a tad bit more carefully placed in a few places, in my opinion it might have made the impact and technique go up to at least a 4 and a 1/2 if not a 5 altogether.
You don't have to take my advice, obviously, but since you've requested a critique I tried to do my best in giving you one that could help in the future, if not let me know.
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Irtimidd In reply to scheinbar [2018-10-13 20:35:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for the mention. It's appreciated
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oblivionhaze [2011-07-07 08:27:09 +0000 UTC]
ah. this was one of your own i wanted to see who the artist youd featured was, and their page, as always
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HajaoqueHouver [2010-06-18 08:06:52 +0000 UTC]
Hello Christiane, It's been featured here [link]
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scheinbar In reply to HajaoqueHouver [2010-06-18 12:27:26 +0000 UTC]
thank you very much :thanks
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HajaoqueHouver In reply to scheinbar [2010-01-07 01:58:03 +0000 UTC]
my pleasure Christiane
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scheinbar In reply to HajaoqueHouver [2010-01-06 12:01:02 +0000 UTC]
Karenia, thanks so much
you're one of the kindest
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HajaoqueHouver In reply to scheinbar [2010-01-07 01:58:34 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure Christiane
Sincerely
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Eckenheimer [2010-01-04 10:26:12 +0000 UTC]
das ist verdammt gut. und ich kenne das gefühl ganz genau.
großartig.
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scheinbar In reply to Eckenheimer [2010-01-04 17:30:31 +0000 UTC]
Danke sehr, ich weiß jetzt nicht ob ich mich für dich freue, wenn du dieses blöde gefühl auch kennst aber so ist es nun mal...
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OrdinaryFella [2010-01-01 01:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Great work!
This plays with my perception of foreground and background. For a second I can fool myself into thinking the figure can pull themselves out of the hole to the light. Then it flips around and there is no escape.
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scheinbar In reply to OrdinaryFella [2010-01-01 16:46:18 +0000 UTC]
thanks
glad, you like it
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Bark [2009-12-31 14:22:34 +0000 UTC]
love the concept! it seems to be done, until you look up... always more climbing to do... very nicely done with the brush strokes and unusual light, too.
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Art2mys [2009-12-31 02:57:09 +0000 UTC]
This is a masterpiece Christiane!
A beautiful illustration of the human condition.
It makes me thing of the book "The Tunnel" of Samuel Beckett
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BlindEyeTwist [2009-12-31 01:16:24 +0000 UTC]
Das ist wohl das beste Bild, dass ich heute gesehen hab.
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scheinbar In reply to BlindEyeTwist [2009-12-31 01:37:55 +0000 UTC]
mann, du bist einfach ... ach ich weiß auch nciht wie.... vielen Dank jedenfalls, jetzt kann ich glücklich schlafen gehen...Danke, Dennis.
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BlindEyeTwist In reply to scheinbar [2009-12-31 01:43:07 +0000 UTC]
Naja, das ist auch nur die Wahrheit gewesen
aber freut mich, wenn du nun glücklicher schläfst.
Gern geschehen, Christiane und dir schonmal jetzt einen Guten Rutsch ins neue Jahr.
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KrishD [2009-12-31 00:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! Love the way the hurdles are the focus...really creates an impact..
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