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Published: 2017-05-29 05:02:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 697; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 0
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HOLY FRICK this is hands down my new favorite drawing of mine ever, probably cuz I love these photo booth photos!Thanks to and for the pose references!
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Cute image right here. First thing I got to comment on is the coloring, or rather the colors. Simple, yet very effective. It has a very tender and somewhat attractive feel towards it, which makes the image itself quite appealing. Reminds me a bit of what you see in some children's books, but in a good way. The poses aren't too bad themselves, but could use a bit more refining. Now what does need a bit more improvement is the anatomy. I get they're cartoons and all and it's only natural that they don't necessarily have to look like a real person. However, you still got to note that some features still need to be kept in play. The one that needs the most work is the arms and hands. The bending looks really flat, giving off a VERY 2D look, and I don't mean 2D as in drawing, but more like paper, in which you can simply fold them. I'd also comment a bit on the necks, but that part may really just be your style.Β
Overall, still a good pic. Good colors and decent poses. The anatomy needs slight tweaking. Keep it up!
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Thanks for the critique! I'm glad you like it, but yeah, the anatomy sucks. Β Thanks again!Β
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Let me start off by saying you've done a pretty good job on several parts of this. Like the light reflections. Those are all really well done, great job. Especially on Lapis's water wings in the last panel, Which normally I would tell you to try and blend it. but in the actual Steven Universe still it is unblended. And then also it's good on the actual character likeness. No argument on that. Now, on to some advice to help you improve. First off, for the outside of the panels(the gutters, which is the technical term) probably would have been better off if they were a different color then the background color of the panels themselves. it would have made it look more like a photo booth thing. Also, the *nose boop* was a tiny bit unnecessary. I mean, I can see that, you don't have to tell me. Overall, I'd say it's a good piece.
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Thanks for your critique! I'm relieved that the wings look nice... water is HARD! But I'll definitely try to keep your improvements in mind!
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Nice work. I like how you don't need strokes and it definitely looks great. I want to see the fuse of lapidot happening. Hope it is in this season.
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THIS IS SO AMAZING DUDE
ITS CUTE AND PRETTY AND HHHHHHHHHH
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