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Published: 2014-02-13 01:16:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1380; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 4
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There is magic, there is fantasy, then there is an entire epic written for the sole purpose of fleshing out a linguist's unhealthy obsession with creating entire languages.That last one is Lord of the Rings, in case you're wondering.
Done with mechanical and 2B pencils on an overly hot night with insufficient sleep and rushing, blinking excitement over the story that never finished. However, with the power of retroactive continuity, I can use this picture once more for this bitching piece here !
For full effect, listen to this: www.youtube.com/watch?v=1DvcQu…
Yeah, yeah, yeah, I stole the idea.
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This is outstanding! How did I not see this in my inbox before!?
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Thank you
It was sitting so long in storage...
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Many thanks! It was sitting in storage for a while.
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And yes, it is really really awesome with the music
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Thank you, Charge. Perhaps this will help scrape away the bad feelings?
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I heard you couldn't muster up the energy to write for Arkangel lately.
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I take back my earlier remark about not having any creativity, did a lil TP work for it today x3
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Ah, good? Can I see?
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titanpad.com/jOXK0tvpG7 it's kinda slapdash and a lot old and a lot wrote while I was not at all feeling into the story so, pardon how shaky it is.
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It's fine. I like it!
Not going to read any more in case of spoilers, of course. Say, where Janesh at?
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Currently Janesh is in full sneak mode poking about looking for Pyros #1 Sniper. Once Etzal comes back out of the deeps he'll consider his contract completed for watching his back and he'll once more be solo.
I like Janesh a lot, I like the design I've got for em
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Heh
heheh
Oh, shit.
If I pitted him into a one-on-one against a dude from my side, who would win?
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Well, I'd like the readers to get a feel for em. Hate em and fear em and then climax it all with him finally getting put down by one of your snipers in a split second reaction, or even a tragic "Im dying, but I'm taking you with me" moment. Janesh is getting old after all, and his whole mindset is survival of the fitest, he knows he's an old wolf on the prowl. Full of years and years of hard earned deadly skill and focus, but his strength, endurance and sharpness can only decrease as he gets older. So, I'd say he'd win at first, just to further a deeper story.
If it came down to both snipers dying in some far and out of the way place that could even go down as a local legend, both hunters still up there somewhere, forever locked in a cat and mouse dance.
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Sounds good. Very good. I imagined both of them dying next to each other, weak and laughing both their heads off at the stupidity of their scenario.
Although my guy has some sort of deus ex machina. Seriously, the more I think about what is going to happen to him, the more stupid it sounds.
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I think we can have a lot of fun with this one, forgive me though I dunno what deus ex machina is 
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Much excellence. A deus ex machina means 'god from the machine', a term used in plays when suddenly an omnipotent, unrelated, extremely powerful entity comes out from nowhere to 'resolve' the situation. Examples would be the Rocks Fall, Everyone Dies maneuver, Doomrider popping out of nowhere and dropping cocaine all over the floor that the bad guy conveniently slips on and the like. Usually a cheap method to get out of a corner one has painted oneself to.
Good luck, mate. I might not be here tomorrow, but look forward to seeing your ideas. Night, Charge.
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Ah! I see, that makes much more sense now, I'd heard it before was too skittish to ask lolol
The Sinclair story is set up now, all 85 needs to do is talk to Scelene and Crash and Pyro and I can take it from there and wrap that little story up and be done with it.
For Arkangel and Janesh, I've been thinking, I would like a good tragic end to it, both hunters biting the dust, like you say right beside one another, we can set that up however you'd like. It can be drawn out where it's cat and mouse all over the region or within a small area, completely open to ideas we can toss back and forth x3
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I'm ready to write the 85-Crash-Scelence arc. Would you kindly Note me the link?
Also, that sounds perfect. Let's make it within a small area, both fighting quietly and anyone unlucky enough to enter the area dies. A drawn-out sniper battle of patience, hunger and endurance.
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notchthegreat.titanpad.com/2 ? this one here, same as before, Pyro and I are ready to take it from there after 85 makes his move
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I'm there now. Ready when you are, Charge.
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G'head and let err rip! I assume 85 isn't too keen on Jess killing a bunch and sends Scelene and Crash to talk to her, where they find out Jess is just waiting until the coast is clear to go in and vandalize their barracks, as that's the true Niliesian way, they're raiders at heart, why fight when she can just break and take their stuff? XD
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