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I want comments D8 Helpful ones! Critique! Encouraging ones! And lots of them! ;; cause right now I feel my art is shit and I need some help. [JOURNAL.]Could someone maybe redline this or something?
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Foxish113 [2008-05-20 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]
I'm not the best either, but try making the legs a little bigger, plus the thighs. hope this helps! ^^
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Saellek-Star [2008-05-04 23:46:16 +0000 UTC]
hmmmm u want constructive critisism? ok then...hang on tight...
first of all, do u use guidelines before you actually draw something? those are lightly draw shapes to show where everything goes. (def use pencil) you should do that if u dont, and look at the drawing as a whole rather than just one line at a time; that helps with proportions.
u have good intentions with the furryness, its good that the lines for teh furryness are varied (a lot of ppl have trouble with that...i know i did not too long ago XD)
another thing i can say is just to practice, practice, practice and draw many many things until u like how they look. it worked for me; i wanted to draw in the style i do now, but the first few pics werent that great and then somehow they transformed into awesome XD
i hope i wasnt too mean and maybe somewhat helpful bu i think these suggestions will help.
<3
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scoots8564 In reply to Saellek-Star [2008-05-05 22:39:19 +0000 UTC]
8D Thank youuu! That helps a lot (: And no, that wasn't mean <333
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Saellek-Star In reply to scoots8564 [2008-05-06 02:20:35 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, glad i could help!
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xuite [2008-04-02 22:08:00 +0000 UTC]
I love how you draw everything~ <33
Just that, the heads a bit big compared to the rest of the body. c:
Maybe making the neck a bit skinnier and then you'll be like, "O: The head look like it's going to snap of! -draws it smaller-"
xDD
I love the wings a lot though~ <33
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MoonDoggie613 [2008-04-02 16:25:44 +0000 UTC]
Aw your art isn't bad D: I love how you drew her face and paws n.n The pose looks really nice too c: I did a little redline that I hope helps...I'm not really great at anatomy, especially at a pose like this one though [link]
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scoots8564 In reply to MoonDoggie613 [2008-04-02 22:32:42 +0000 UTC]
8D That helps a lot!! Thank youu
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