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Kevin and Buizel (Second Edition)Forword:
My passion for stories has always made me want to develop the most incredible of characters in my head, my first good characters were indeed Kevin and Buizel. These two characters in particular are very fortunate to have ever made it into a whole story. Which is why I am redoing it to bring it to actual justice and specifically to correct many weird stuff that the story had within itself.
When I was young I really enjoyed reading about people undergoing big changes and how it affects them, Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka was probably the first story that inspired me to make great and unexpected challenges for the characters.
I really wanted to find stories like these on fanfiction from my favorite universes and Pokemon was my favourite at the time, although the fanfics I had found always ended in a very "specific" way, which is why I decided to create Kevin and Buizel as a statement to make people think that the story is something they were expecting only to realize later that the meaning had more depth than the mundane conclusions the other fanfics had.
This edition of Kevin and Buizel gets rid of such mostly because it detracts from the core concept of what K&B really stands for, want to know what that is? Delve on for yourself then, sit down and let the story unfold before you.
This is the story of true friendship shared between a pokemon and his trainer; Kevin. They join Ash's group for a while to chat but when both of them part ways, Kevin goes missing. This is the story of a trainer who made an unexpected companion, a pokemon that found a new family and a friendship that will never shatter...
Prologue:
"One of the things I really enjoy the most about being with my best friend, Buizel, is to simply relax and enjoy the company of each other. The only thing I would wish however is the absolute opposite, I wish I could talk to my Buizel because throughout the years I've always felt that he himself has something to tell me... "
Kevin thought to himself while looking at his pokemon friend just relaxing alongside him.
"What must I do to know what you want to tell me? I'll do whatever is required..."
Kevin's mind was restless as he looked at his companion, such a good friend was always beside him. The fact that forever might pass and he would never understand what he wants to tell him has made his hopes sink, that maybe he will never be able to share more of his friendship with his pokemon.
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And ladies and gentlemen, it's coming back for a second edition! I hope you are all somewhat excited and for new viewers I hope you do enjoy!
K&B was one of my first ever fully thought out story compared to other stories I have thought about in the past. K&B was made around 6 years ago, right about when I was just starting out in college. I just felt like writing a story and voila!
And now since I know far more about storytelling I'd figure... why not I try to rewrite this and flesh it out?
I hope you do enjoy!! The first chapter will come soon too, I just need a bit of time
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Comments: 36
bigotonoto [2013-10-29 20:40:13 +0000 UTC]
Aww cool Its been so long since I read your fic...
(I honestly forgot about it )
I can't wait to read and re-live this story again
will you be uploading the chapters here? and/or In fanfiction.net?
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ScottFraser In reply to bigotonoto [2013-10-29 22:02:37 +0000 UTC]
They will be uploaded here, infact, Chapter 1 is already out.
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bigotonoto In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-29 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]
I just saw it Will definitely read later Gracias!
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JQBuizel [2013-10-25 01:53:18 +0000 UTC]
ASDFYAY!!! Can't wait to see the first bit of the next bit! X3
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ScottFraser In reply to JQBuizel [2013-10-25 02:23:49 +0000 UTC]
I'll maybe post it tomorrow or saturday... time will tell!
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ScottFraser In reply to JQBuizel [2013-10-25 02:23:33 +0000 UTC]
It's a very interesting book. I like the aspect in which the poor man's family just turned their backs towards him and found out the truth about what his family hid from him (the saved money). My take on that is the fact that his family did not feel him as a human anymore therefore it was like he never existed.
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JQBuizel In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 02:55:47 +0000 UTC]
It was all-around weird for me. I mean, I get the purpose of it and what was happening, but how Greg just was in denial for the first half of the book was just painful.
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zacnoob2 [2013-10-25 00:59:30 +0000 UTC]
I still remember the part where he use a leaf to play the music, not sure if that will come out again.
But even if it will or will not, it will not change my opinion of seeing you build up the story again a second time....
Definitely will read your flow of imagination when i'm free !!!
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ScottFraser In reply to zacnoob2 [2013-10-25 01:06:52 +0000 UTC]
Oh man... I don't remember what chapter that was, but it was definitely one of the chapters that was ahead from the original cliffhanger, damn...
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ScottFraser In reply to zacnoob2 [2013-10-25 12:13:17 +0000 UTC]
(I'm going to hide your comment to avoid spoilers for everyone)
That part of the episode was in the last episode on fanfiction, that part is definitely going to be in.
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zacnoob2 In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 13:44:20 +0000 UTC]
ahh i see =O, oh well, since i found the 1st edition of K&B , i shall start reading XP!!
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ScottFraser In reply to zacnoob2 [2013-10-25 15:20:24 +0000 UTC]
it has some inconsistancies though, but the message of the story is still there.
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zacnoob2 In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 16:19:37 +0000 UTC]
its ok, i want to remember the work of your old stories X3!!!
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lpallad In reply to zacnoob2 [2013-10-25 11:57:41 +0000 UTC]
You can see it here www.fanfiction.net/s/5890711/1…
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zacnoob2 In reply to lpallad [2013-10-25 13:41:39 +0000 UTC]
thx , i want to relive the story once more again
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lpallad In reply to zacnoob2 [2013-10-27 19:13:26 +0000 UTC]
The only pity is that there are all the chapters he had written here. But is always better than nothing.
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lpallad [2013-10-24 23:48:59 +0000 UTC]
I really hope that this new version is better than the old one. I'm really curious to see the differences.
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ScottFraser In reply to lpallad [2013-10-24 23:50:34 +0000 UTC]
Alot of the differences won't be seen at first glance, but as the story goes on the fixes will be ever so clear... the biggest change will be that Kevin will no longer want to be the best trainer I had planned but that he only trains pokemon as a hobby and makes music for a living.
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lpallad In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 00:23:55 +0000 UTC]
I guess you're right. Considering the situation, is lighter and credible reduce the ambitions of Kevin.
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ScottFraser In reply to Dustomega [2013-10-24 23:43:07 +0000 UTC]
take your time, the chapters will be coming very slowly.
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Dustomega In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 00:34:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah. i got a lot to do. got work, trying to get into college. need to write a few stories for friends, and need to learn to draw. All while having free time to talk to friends and going to the gym. I have not even played the video game i want to play XD
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ScottFraser In reply to Dustomega [2013-10-25 00:47:49 +0000 UTC]
good luck getting more free time.
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Dustomega In reply to ScottFraser [2013-10-25 01:14:20 +0000 UTC]
I think it is more like trying to break away from free time, and get what needs to be done done
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