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scraptor — I bleed when i think about you
Published: 2011-07-13 14:11:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 796; Favourites: 45; Downloads: 0
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art(c)meok took some effort but i fixed some of the errors, if any one sees more, please tell me i tend to such at spelling
much appriciated
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Comments: 19
This is really nicely done. Very emotional. Awesome work.
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This...is full of many kinds of win.
The only error I see is in this line: "You will never be forgiven, your crimes are to great to look a blind Eye at". The "to" should be "too". But that is such a minor thing. Great job.
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hahahahaha thank you
and thanks, ill change that later ^^
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Wow, this is really beautiful. I can see the time and effort spent on this, it really paid off ♥
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I love the posture. This is beautiful. From my English, I don't see nothing wrong with it.
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^^ thank you for the lovely comment
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yes yes it is, im going to try to fix the errors thought -.-
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