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Scratch52 — Sisterly squabble (4)
Published: 2019-09-05 16:19:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 15232; Favourites: 197; Downloads: 33
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Madeleine notices makenzies socked foot being close enough to tickle in retaliation. With her sister slightly flustered, Madeleine uses all of her strength to push off Makenzie and sit up right.Related content
Comments: 12
I read the comments and someone already mentioned the previous detail in 2, but it is really cool seeing you use previous details this way 
The color to their cheeks is a sweet detail 
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It was a good set up making her boot come off earlier in the story, I'm glad many people noticed that detail
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Good payoff from when Makenzie lost her right boot in "Sisterly squabble (2) ."
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a nice detail for those paying attention
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