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Published: 2008-12-21 01:21:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 187; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Fall Out Boy taught me
it's okay to have long song
titles and you taught me it's
absurd opening up just about as
much as the notion of long song
titles. Tenderness is a rouse,
a rouge feeling from the normal
contrivances wrought on by the
day, set to sue the instance I said,
Dearest one, be mine.

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Place a red dot on a bird,
situate it in front of a mirror and it'll
recognize itself, try to get that spot
off. Place familiar situational disasters
in front of me, call up times of failure
from before and I'll walk right
into the fire, forgetting it's hot.

Avians soared over me in test
scores and Red Bull said I'll get
wings but they haven't come in yet,
just twitching from sugar highs
and lies that left your tongue so easily.
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Comments: 15

etto-etto [2009-01-14 21:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Fall Out Boy taught me
it's okay to have long song
titles and you taught me it's
absurd opening up just about as
much as the notion of long song
titles

I think there should be a comma after "long song titles," otherwise I lose all my breath while reading that long sentence out loud Ah, but I like the beginning~ It has a good sense of humor to it.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to etto-etto [2009-01-17 20:50:18 +0000 UTC]



Yeah, possibly. I was suffering with comma overload at one point, and now I think I'm retreating the opposite way. lol Thanks, ma'am.

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etto-etto In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-01-19 04:30:30 +0000 UTC]

I think it's so funny when you call me "ma'am" because you strike me as significantly older than me (apologies of you're not... >.> lol). And "ma'am" makes me think of an older person XD

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ScribbledNotes In reply to etto-etto [2009-01-31 21:27:18 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yeah, I call anyone and everyone ma'am! lol It's just polite and funny and who does that anymore? lol

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etto-etto In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-02-01 23:41:19 +0000 UTC]

I think just you

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UnLoVeDpOeT [2009-01-02 11:31:28 +0000 UTC]

"Twitching from sugar highs and lies that left your tongue so easily" Wonderful expressionism! Oh and... what about Panic at the Disco?- also have rediculously long titles.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to UnLoVeDpOeT [2009-01-03 19:19:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh goodness yes. But, to me, they just copied Fall Out Boy, since they were out first, though they are label mates.

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Alexa88 [2009-01-01 21:40:33 +0000 UTC]

heh-heh. cool. how you went from fall out boy to red bull i don't know. but cool heh-heh

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Alexa88 [2009-01-03 19:21:33 +0000 UTC]

Cuz that's what I do! You should wander around my mind for a while. You'd be confused after the first two minutes.

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Temeraki [2008-12-26 03:49:42 +0000 UTC]

I like it!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Temeraki [2008-12-27 21:36:58 +0000 UTC]

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hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-12-21 23:51:56 +0000 UTC]

I'll get
wings but that haven't come in yet,
just twitching from sugar highs
and lies that left your tongue so easily.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-12-22 01:00:53 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that so should have been "they" and not "that". *fixes

Thank you dear.

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missmocha [2008-12-21 05:02:10 +0000 UTC]

Amazing <3

I remember the first time I looked at the track listing on Fall Out Boy's From Under the Cork Tree. It made me laugh.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to missmocha [2008-12-22 01:01:13 +0000 UTC]

It is quite silly. They actually calmed down some, too.

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