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Published: 2008-12-21 02:03:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 262; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 3
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Description She courted Grace and Sensibility,
her aura was anything less than otherworldly.
Goddess here on earth, a delightful
surge of expressions and untold feelings
swelled up inside every time I would see
her. She passes me every morning, by the
newspaper stand, with a smile my way,
the teeth I can see allowing the words to
pass through are saying to me, "I'm here
for you. Promises that won't be broken,
tears you'll never need to shed. My love
for you, yes! Love grows for you everyday."

The statement grows longer with each
occurrence, the affection so strong. To
be with her! Could anything mar her beauty,
her force to stir in me these feelings? I
foresee none!

In a store one day, I see her, standing there,
Grace and Sensibility carrying her on their
shoulders, I'm sure of it, with her friends, talking.
Ah, what delightful things could they be discussing?
What riviting topics could be spoken?
Eavesdropping has never been a crime,
from my understanding, you see...

  And I told that b!tc^ I didn't sleep
  with her ugly @$$ boyfriend! B!tc^
  always tryin' to start $%it. I ain't no
  f*##in punk, I am not afraid, I will
  f*##in slap the $%it outta her. I ain't
  got no time for her games. $%itttttt.

Dear me.

I'm not but so old, but I can attest, in my
older years, my eyes seem to fool me,
what for who is that?! Not Grace and Sensibility
carrying her about but Foulness and Treachery!
Vulgarity, it seems, hides itself well and besmirches
these eyes from, anymore longer, seeing the
rottenness of her tongue, her inner person.
Curses, she is anything less than hideous!
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etto-etto [2009-01-14 21:19:31 +0000 UTC]

And I told that b!tc^ I didn't sleep
with her ugly @$$ boyfriend! B!tc^
always tryin' to start $%it. I ain't no
f*##in punk, I am not afraid, I will
f*##in slap the $%it outta her. I ain't
got no time for her games. $%itttttt.

I had to laugh XD It reminds me of so many people I know... And I don't think they realize how ridiculous they actually sound Or maybe I'm cruel for laughing at their drama and innate ability to frequently misspell words like no tomorrow. Regardless, good poem to make people laugh, anyway!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to etto-etto [2009-01-17 20:49:18 +0000 UTC]

HA! Thank you so much! Glad you found the humor in tact!

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Alexa88 [2009-01-01 21:47:38 +0000 UTC]

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Alexa88 [2009-01-03 19:20:41 +0000 UTC]

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Temeraki [2008-12-26 04:02:02 +0000 UTC]

That was humorous, the lead up to a perfect one and then F#$% Awesome! I'm still giggling

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Temeraki [2008-12-27 21:30:24 +0000 UTC]

Great! I'm glad people was able to get it.

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missmocha [2008-12-23 03:43:01 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, another one of your most brilliant works! I love the sense of humor in your more amusing pieces. Simply genius But shouldn't the second line be "her aura was NOTHING less than otherworldly"? O_o

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ScribbledNotes In reply to missmocha [2008-12-27 21:38:41 +0000 UTC]

"anything", "nothing", eh... I don't know! "anything" in my head is a lot more old school. But I guess I could make it "nothing". Thanks for the comment!

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