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Published: 2008-09-01 06:39:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Church bellsresonateetanoser
Stained glass windows
sparkle bright in heavenly
morning light, prisms, spheres
the apostles glorified.
The power of
Christ compels you!
The power of
Christ compels you!
He splashes holy water
repeatedly-ly-ly-ly-ly
on the boy, crying, scared.
Crossing the divide,
Masses come and dis-
band
to ignore their plaintive
cries
burying their
children p
in rough metal soil e
made of guns o
shooting --> - - ple
d
y
ing
Pleasure
rocking a
rolling loud sound
guitars under
sounds
her orgasm
screams of
Pleasure
rocking as
more bombs D
r
o
P
on people
unfit for holy water
Church bells
...
The power of
Christ compels you!
He splashes to clean
before dirty the stain
b l o o d
s o m n a m b u l i s t i c
lives with-
in us to
accept
lIfe as normal
because he'll
The power of
Christ compels you!
wash our sins
C L E A N
while we
c( )m to our lovers
s( )cc( )mb to drink
cons( )me food
watching TV
watching YouTube
watching the bombs
p
o
r
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It's all about
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Comments: 7
katepowellshine [2008-11-26 03:27:44 +0000 UTC]
very sort of ee cummings, with the page layout. I like it!
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ScribbledNotes In reply to katepowellshine [2008-11-27 19:14:40 +0000 UTC]
I was READING him at the time when I wrote this. Thank YOU for noticing! I haven't (obviously) done this style in a while. I wanna again.
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IsabellaMichel [2008-09-01 22:49:24 +0000 UTC]
I very much agree. Love the placement of the words you wanted to stand out.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to IsabellaMichel [2008-09-02 04:56:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so very much!
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CrinaPrida [2008-09-01 07:09:27 +0000 UTC]
I like it - it's raw, intense and ultimately beautiful
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