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ScribbledNotes — Holy Water or, exonerated
Published: 2008-09-01 06:39:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 214; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Church bells
         resonateetanoser
Stained glass windows
        sparkle bright in heavenly
        morning light, prisms, spheres
        the apostles glorified.

                The power of
                Christ compels you!
                The power of
                Christ compels you!
        He splashes holy water
        repeatedly-ly-ly-ly-ly
        on the boy, crying, scared.

        Crossing the divide,
        Masses come and dis-
                band
        to ignore their plaintive
                cries
                  burying their
                  children         p
        in rough metal soil   e
        made of guns           o
        shooting -->  -  -     ple
                                      d
                                      y
                                   ing

Pleasure
                   rocking a
        rolling loud sound
          guitars under
                sounds
        her   orgasm
                screams of
Pleasure
                rocking as
        more bombs   D
                              r
                              o
                              P
                on people
        unfit for holy water

        Church bells
            ...

                The power of
                Christ compels you!
        He splashes to clean
        before dirty the stain
        b l o o d

   s o m n a m b u l i s t i c
               lives with-
   in us to
        accept
          lIfe as normal
        because he'll
                The power of
Christ compels you!
        wash our sins
                C L E A N
          while we
        c( )m to our lovers
        s( )cc( )mb to drink
        cons( )me food
                watching TV
                watching YouTube
                watching the bombs
                                         p
                                      o
                                   r
                               D

          It's all about
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Comments: 7

katepowellshine [2008-11-26 03:27:44 +0000 UTC]

very sort of ee cummings, with the page layout. I like it!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to katepowellshine [2008-11-27 19:14:40 +0000 UTC]

I was READING him at the time when I wrote this. Thank YOU for noticing! I haven't (obviously) done this style in a while. I wanna again.

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IsabellaMichel [2008-09-01 22:49:24 +0000 UTC]

I very much agree. Love the placement of the words you wanted to stand out.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to IsabellaMichel [2008-09-02 04:56:14 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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IsabellaMichel In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-09-02 14:44:18 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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CrinaPrida [2008-09-01 07:09:27 +0000 UTC]

I like it - it's raw, intense and ultimately beautiful

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ScribbledNotes In reply to CrinaPrida [2008-09-02 04:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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