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Description You used to like
pulling caterpillar
legs off and watching
them move till functions failed
while I used to like
saying Bye to you,
watching you get smaller
till I failed to make you out.

I've know tomboys to exude
massive amounts of
sex appeal, but I found it
better to take along the
"s" and leave you with
what’s left behind.
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Comments: 10

bohemianpoets [2008-10-18 06:46:58 +0000 UTC]

"watching you get smaller
till I failed to make you out."

incredible.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to bohemianpoets [2008-10-24 22:34:33 +0000 UTC]

THANK you!

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Alexa88 [2008-08-15 17:55:34 +0000 UTC]

awww. excellent...would have taken off the "s" too....that's mean with the caterpillar

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Alexa88 [2008-08-16 02:22:22 +0000 UTC]

I knows! I don't know where that came from. Hmmm...

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diktorsa [2008-08-12 17:17:08 +0000 UTC]

how is it possible to live best times in your life. best times plural. as if you were living plural lives at the very moment. if it's so, i'm jelous in a way. anyway, i believe it was einstein who denied the existance of time.
didn't like this one too much, though

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ScribbledNotes In reply to diktorsa [2008-08-13 01:43:39 +0000 UTC]

I always throw "s" on the ends of stuff even if it doesn't belong. Just cuz.

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YouInventedMe [2008-08-12 07:36:15 +0000 UTC]

while I used to like
saying Bye to you,
watching you get smaller
till I failed to make you out.



great stuff


xo!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-08-13 01:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!!

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hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-08-12 06:59:18 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, wordplay, sexual references, and a speck of biting humor [well, I see it as funny, either way.]

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ScribbledNotes In reply to hauntingmewithsmiles [2008-08-13 01:43:06 +0000 UTC]

As well as it should!

Thanks!

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