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ScribbledNotes — Leagues Ahead
Published: 2008-08-24 04:35:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 2
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Description You basically piss me off,
is how you put a period on
our six months of bliss,
officially putting it in remission.
I stood, dumbfounded,
draped in sadness. You hated
to see me like that, such a
sorry state, pulled the drapes
over my head and I stood there
in brief quiet repose.
I went to make a statement,
but you held your hand up,
   I believe,
said, Your words on me have
been spent, you don't have enough
to make a peep, and my objection
went into rejection before it became
one and you sat there, cross legged,
of course, very classy, reading the
magazine I brought for you,
hearing the streak of pink highlighter
circling pictures with your
ooo'ings and ahh'ings over the newest
fashions from Europe.
You were always ahead of these
American girls, and me.
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Comments: 6

katepowellshine [2008-08-24 19:25:02 +0000 UTC]

"hearing the streak of pink highlighter"

Very visceral - very real. This is my favorite line.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to katepowellshine [2008-08-24 22:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That's actually the line I worked on (worked on, meaning, personalizing it, giving it a color). So glad and amazed you picked up on that.

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Alexa88 [2008-08-24 06:23:06 +0000 UTC]

aww. so sad lol. nicely done of course, but dag. poor thing. kay. nicely written

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ScribbledNotes In reply to Alexa88 [2008-08-24 06:49:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, dear!!!

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vanityproject [2008-08-24 05:42:51 +0000 UTC]

holy shit. i love this one so much. i don't know why... it just seems to speak to me... (possibly reminds me of someone?) well done!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to vanityproject [2008-08-24 05:58:21 +0000 UTC]

Ha! Thanks so much! Glad you like it.

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