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She said, "You know something likea dollar or a piece of paper or a plastic bag
that you try to pick up on a windy day,
you get close to it and just then it starts
to move away and you're looking completely
ridiculous chasing this bag around a parking lot?
Every moment you think it's rested from the wind's
gust, and your outstretched hand goes for it,
it moves suddenly, you know? That's how you
are every time I try to get close to you."
He stared out into the distance.
"I feel ridiculous trying to pick you up,
running around in this parking space of hearts
and fears and everything in between where Leprechauns
and golden nuggets of happiness are kept, demons
and otherworldly things lurking around bends
and shadows and every spooky thing hide. I
just want to catch you; I can't. I can't. And
I feel ridiculous at times, I do. I really do."
He stared out into the distance.
"You have nothing to say?" she said.
"It feels funny to me, that you think you're the
chaser," he started. She swallowed. "I always
assumed you were the wind," he said.
She believed her heart just stopped then.
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Comments: 34
myheartsong [2009-02-02 04:35:10 +0000 UTC]
Wow. You always make me smile with how incredible you are at imagery and evoking emotions! This one's no different :]
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ScribbledNotes In reply to myheartsong [2009-02-07 16:25:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! And wow, you changed your avatar. Very chic.
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myheartsong In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-02-08 04:48:03 +0000 UTC]
ha, I just now realized that it's been nearly a year that I've had that one that Jazz drew up. Thank you!!
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ScribbledNotes In reply to powgrl [2009-01-31 21:05:30 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it pleases you so.
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Alexa88 [2009-01-10 23:21:58 +0000 UTC]
awww. you just stopped. the pome just ended lol. I wanted more very nice. love imagery (think that's what i want to say) lol, thought it was going to be the guys fault for once
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ScribbledNotes In reply to Alexa88 [2009-01-17 20:51:06 +0000 UTC]
I had one like that before! Where it was the guys fault! lol Anyway, thanks.
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FructisIndia [2009-01-09 00:24:58 +0000 UTC]
This is...
the best thing I have read in a while.
Thank you for sharing it.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to FructisIndia [2009-01-10 18:33:47 +0000 UTC]
Goodness me, thank you for appreciating this.
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FructisIndia In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-01-18 08:26:31 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, I really enjoyed it.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to ejectionletter [2009-01-10 18:34:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.
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bitexxher [2009-01-06 01:27:26 +0000 UTC]
...is it a coincidence that I'm reading this today?
Your stuff is brilliant, like always.
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ottersandsky [2009-01-05 08:30:45 +0000 UTC]
Great movie. This poem is wonderful, absolutely. The ending... this whole thing! I relate to it exactly. And the ending just makes my heart stop too, as corny as that sounds.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to ottersandsky [2009-01-10 18:35:28 +0000 UTC]
HA! That's what it was meant to do.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to TweekFreak [2009-01-03 22:50:09 +0000 UTC]
YOU! You're who I have to look at. I sit here, haven't been here in forever and think and think and think, Who do I need to check out?? You!
And thank you!!!
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TweekFreak In reply to ScribbledNotes [2009-01-04 04:34:17 +0000 UTC]
there's not much to look at, unfortunately but thank you anyway.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to TweekFreak [2009-01-10 19:51:51 +0000 UTC]
I know. I saw. I still need to comment, though.
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hauntingmewithsmiles [2009-01-03 21:51:19 +0000 UTC]
I do love this.
The closing especially. : )
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ScribbledNotes In reply to hauntingmewithsmiles [2009-01-03 22:13:24 +0000 UTC]
I am truly happy you enjoy this.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to CrinaPrida [2009-01-03 21:44:23 +0000 UTC]
AH! I missed you! I'm so at your page.
And thank you.
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AsteriaSinclair [2009-01-03 21:35:01 +0000 UTC]
im a huge fan of American Beauty
im a huge fan of the quotes about the bag of American beauty
this is exceptionally great to me
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ScribbledNotes In reply to AsteriaSinclair [2009-01-03 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]
So many thanks to you.
That movie was amazing. And so sad. Like, really sad.
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