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ScribbledNotes — Smiling But You Dont Know
Published: 2008-08-22 04:40:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 106; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 3
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Description You're gonna call me particular
while I call you a stickler,
both putting the sour faces on,
our lips pouting so long we'll trip up,

tumble and fall down, realize we're
both clowns and send our frowns
downtown for the mayor to deal with
the problem till he raise taxes to

pay for the consultants. We'll take ‘em back,
(city folk in a riot) put them back on till
wrinkle lines become etched in our foreheads,
scaring kids away; Halloween in August.
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Comments: 8

YouInventedMe [2008-08-25 02:13:55 +0000 UTC]

fantastic

especially the first stanza


xo!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to YouInventedMe [2008-08-25 22:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Ha! I thought you'd like that one. Thanks!

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CrinaPrida [2008-08-22 04:46:51 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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ScribbledNotes In reply to CrinaPrida [2008-08-22 05:38:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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CrinaPrida In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-08-22 10:01:52 +0000 UTC]

Love you for being you - such a strange thing to meet virtual personae - life no longer seems that dull...

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ScribbledNotes In reply to CrinaPrida [2008-08-23 01:56:43 +0000 UTC]

That makes me feel tremendously great! Thank you so much! And it's pretty much, more an honor for me to know you actually like my stuff!

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CrinaPrida In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-08-23 15:16:07 +0000 UTC]

I totally do - I might not be wise enough to understand it all, but I DOOOOO!!!

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ScribbledNotes In reply to CrinaPrida [2008-08-24 01:20:42 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it don't take wisdom to understand my stuff. Some of my stuff can be taken literally, like this piece, which is then just silly, but some are metaphors for stuff... but this ain't one of them. lol

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