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coffee smells thissmall apartment room,
stepping over
lingerie, jeans,
basking in spring's sun
streaming through bay windows.
glance over to
delicate sheets
draped in
delicate ways;
you glow in your
sleep.
watch your chest
rise and fall,
I smell of intimacy,
of fresh serenity;
existence moved light-years
above bearable.
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Comments: 6
bohemianpoets [2008-04-19 23:25:48 +0000 UTC]
incredible,
the full title itself was captivating i cant express that enough
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ScribbledNotes In reply to bohemianpoets [2008-04-24 03:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Wow, really? I really pride myself on my titles, too. Thanks so much!
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bohemianpoets In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-04-27 12:46:09 +0000 UTC]
hahaha its amazing because your titles complete your written words its sensational
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poisonedrose [2008-04-18 13:03:10 +0000 UTC]
'...light-years
above bearable.'
What a beautiful way to end a poem.
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ScribbledNotes In reply to poisonedrose [2008-04-24 03:23:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I really like this ending too.
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