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Published: 2008-04-18 03:51:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 310; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Description coffee smells this
  small apartment room,
stepping over
lingerie, jeans,
  basking in spring's sun
streaming through bay windows.

glance over to
   delicate sheets
  draped in
delicate ways;
you glow in your
   sleep.

watch your chest
   rise and fall,
I smell of intimacy,
   of fresh serenity;
existence moved light-years
     above bearable.
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Comments: 6

bohemianpoets [2008-04-19 23:25:48 +0000 UTC]

incredible,
the full title itself was captivating i cant express that enough

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ScribbledNotes In reply to bohemianpoets [2008-04-24 03:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow, really? I really pride myself on my titles, too. Thanks so much!

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bohemianpoets In reply to ScribbledNotes [2008-04-27 12:46:09 +0000 UTC]

hahaha its amazing because your titles complete your written words its sensational

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ScribbledNotes In reply to bohemianpoets [2008-04-29 03:28:56 +0000 UTC]

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poisonedrose [2008-04-18 13:03:10 +0000 UTC]

'...light-years
above bearable.'

What a beautiful way to end a poem.

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ScribbledNotes In reply to poisonedrose [2008-04-24 03:23:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I really like this ending too.

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