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Published: 2011-07-22 06:09:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 7741; Favourites: 448; Downloads: 441
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Haven't posted anything really art worthy in a while so you better enjoy this piece of shit that I worked on for you. Also working on style practice, would appreciate feedback.ENJOY!
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This is really great. It makes it easy to see all of the trolls.
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I Act So Much Like Terezi XD
My Friend Acts Like Sollux XD She pretends She has And Isp And I think She Talks In that Voice So Much Shes Developing On XD
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that tavros. makes me happy inside ;u; and eridans face XD its AMAZING
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Ohmygod your style is so adorable sdkfkljfdslk
The way you draw Gamzee and Eridan is fabulous
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I like the different head-shapes and expressions per person, makes it more interesting. Instead of me looking at this and thinking, "Yup, they drew Tavros/Gamzee/Karkat," I think, "AWWWW~~~ THEY DREW HIM SO WELL!!!!!!"
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everybody has such great facial expressions!
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THE BEST FACE.
OF COURSE.
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/enjoys
/posts feedback
Weeeeell. I really like the cartoonness of it and how they all look individual while still retaining the same basic shapes. :>
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Thank you it means a lot.
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Since you asked so nicely I will do as you say and enjoy it (which I would have done anyways because it is quite excellent).
In terms of feedback I can tell you that I find this to be a great style. The facial expressions look vibrant and animated (which is good for a cartoon style) and are well complimented by the smoother rounded shapes (personally I prefer it to your previous angular cheek-bone style). Lines are messy but well defined (and the messiness is part of the style here so it works well), and colours are well contrasted to give more definition. Shading is also handled very well, being subtle enough to not be intrusive but still give depth. All in all quite excellent. Is that enough feedback for you?
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I was aiming for vibrancy and emotion so I'm glad you think they are deemed worthy for the title. hehe the smoother shapes of the head helped me play around with different head structures compared to the cheekbone head, though I still use it on occasion. Messy bold lines are my favorite to mess with, though fine lines or no lineart at all are fun to do too. Shading was slightly effortless but I'm glad that it's subtle yet not too bland. YES THAT IS ENOUGH FEEDBACK YOU AMAZING PERSON YOU. thanks a bunch!
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Oh one thing I forgot to detail in my first comment is that the the facial expressions are not only vibrant, but stay well enough in proportion to appear believable (bridging the gap between regular expressions and over the top ones like in your "The Answer To The Universe" piece). I wish I could have had a few more constructive things to say but I can't find anything inherently wrong or really needing improvement with this, so I'm glad you enjoyed the ego stroking. You're welcome!
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Hehehe, I love your style! And you do expressions wonderfully, so well I'm jealous. 
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They aren't really zombies! I liked your dave! (stopped by your page) People have their own way of doing expressions, just keep working at it and I'm sure you'll get better and develop a comfortable. Practice makes perfect.
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Heh, thanks.
I just really need to practice me expressions~
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She is unimpressed by her by her needs to be impressed.
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so HAPPY. i wish i could make characters smile /that/ giddily.
Kanaya looks male though, but everyone else looks good.
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Thanks! haha yeah kind of went too dark on her outline which took out all the details?
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idk on the outline, i think its a hair/eye shape combo...
i have the same issue, ill have an ok looking girl, then i draw on her (thin) eyebrows and suddenly it looks like a drag queen
if you said "everyone and kanayas genderbend" i think i would look peachy. like, she looks good as a guy, the way you drew her.
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