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SDevilHeart — D.O.R. Ch. 2 Pg 8
Published: 2009-05-08 13:40:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 2044; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 13
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Ugh i hate audiences. their such a pain to colori wonder why they would go through all that trouble for a winner hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm <.<
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remember to look out for spelling errors and i'll make you one of these~
[link] -will correct spelling errors until May 13-
characters belong to these people
-in the order to how they appeared-
IMAGINE EVERYONE IN THIS STORY AS A HUMAN [link]
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*insert fitting comment that I could not think of here*
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lol! I knew it! no body would want to enter that!!!
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your welcome. :3 funny how you were the only one who entered. That may be good to remember for future expensive raffles XD
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omg. that is epic win right there. is this still a true story? lol
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nope not true whatsoever
completley fiction
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oh... i thought it was based on a true story. oh well :\
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more like it was based on a dream
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I guess that's where the title fits in xD;;
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Hmm.... Now what do they want with SD..... And why SD? Very curious...
Can't find any errors that haven't already been pointed out, so good job!
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Oh! I forgot to say what I liked about the comic page XD I really like the was SD looks in the first panel, I think she looks ADORABLE!! >w< I also really like the shading C: VERY good! Another awesome page, SD, keep it up!
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heh thank you. i also shade Khitsune's eyes differently this time. i think they look nice
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No problem C:
Yeah, I think it looks better this way C:
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Ha ha, that's genius for just her to join.
Hmm,
"No we didn't." should probably be "No, we didn't."
And also, I think
"Ok, now I shall explain why Miss. SwordDancer won." should probably be "Ok, now I shall explain why, Miss SwordDancer, won."
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yeah your right.
k what character shall i do?
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Primond ( [link] )
o: Thanks~!
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technicaly should be spelled technically
there is a . after miss
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sorry someone else already got those
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idk why but somehow from the moment this raflle started i expected this to happen, lol
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it was pretty obvious in my opinion.
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i mean that she was the only one who entered
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but they kinda said that on the last page of CH 1 but apparently no one else got that TT.TT
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ow w8 did thay realy say that.... i forgot about that.... >.<;;
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x3 I think that "Can you not kneel down to my level" bit should have a question mark at the end.
But, anyways, I love everybody's expressions on this one. X3 They really fit. xD Especially in that 4th panel.
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ack crap your right, i'll fix that
k what character shall i do?
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Hmm... Could you do my friend's character, Mewfive? [link]
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why's there a period after "Miss." Swordancer? o.o
But I was thinkng that.. no one else would risk such a thing like entering an expensive mystrious raffle! XD
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aww man sorry.
k what character shall i do?
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XD Love the audience panel and how the little brown character sticks out. Also love the main characters' expressions in that panel. ^-^ Nice work.
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"Technicaly" in the last panel should be technically~
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oh crap how did i miss that. i'm actually not really this bad at spelling. WTF?!
k what character shall i do?
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Ahaha, I make silly mistakes like that too. It's normal, I guess xD
Hm~ [link] Proto-kun, please. The blue creature.
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k will do.
can i call him Proto or do i call him Proto-kun
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You can call him Proto. I just tend to add the -kun to the end. XD
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