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SeasonsofPast — Rising or Setting

Published: 2009-09-30 03:48:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description Goodbye to you, my distant past
You served me well thus far
Yet now, upon this old worn path
I must part

The future is waiting, just o'er the horizon
And I am afraid, dear friend, that you wont find a place there
But Past, do not feel forgotten
You live within special places, dark and safe,
Locked away from the world; Not even the brilliance of a thousand suns could shatter your fragile memories

I promise to remember you
With this one final parting glance, I do bid you farewell
To all the happiness
To all the pain
This is goodbye, but not forgotten


(wish that came out better...)
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Comments: 2

kawaiiFuu [2009-09-30 04:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Poetry was beautiful.

I loved it.

Work is absolutely fantastic - did you take this picture?

Critique - I think the person could be a little bit more defined. The picture itself is fantastic - but the person can be easily looked over. Only suggestion.

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SeasonsofPast In reply to kawaiiFuu [2009-09-30 13:00:29 +0000 UTC]

There is no manipulation on this besides the BW filter

And yea, I could do more contrast probably.

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